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Double Drabble: 'Lockers'
Oct 30, 2007 23:32
Two hundred words of Jackishness and (eeep!) unbetaed, but hopefully OK, written for the current drabble challenge at Black Pearl Sails.
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torn_eledhwen
October 31 2007, 08:29:10 UTC
Excellent! :)
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geekmama
October 31 2007, 12:37:36 UTC
Thank you!
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artaxastra
October 31 2007, 10:31:24 UTC
Oh dear! Poor Jack! I hope the rum locker is all right!
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geekmama
October 31 2007, 12:40:12 UTC
And that rum has the same effect in the Locker! *G*
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salr323
October 31 2007, 10:47:36 UTC
That was great. I really liked this line:
He sank against the door, something shifting inside, tilting disastrously.
This one, also, seems to sum up Jack's particular wisdom:
"Just go with it, mate. Spot o' rum'll set you up."
:)
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geekmama
October 31 2007, 12:42:05 UTC
Thank you so much!
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geekmama
October 31 2007, 12:42:21 UTC
Thanks!
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p0wdermonkey
October 31 2007, 11:09:21 UTC
Lovely! I can never get enough multiple Jacks and this is a great way for Jack #1 to become aware of them. Love the mix of horror and matter-of-fact getting on with it - very in character.
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geekmama
October 31 2007, 12:46:17 UTC
Thanks!
the mix of horror and matter-of-fact getting on with it
That is Jack all over, isn't it? One of his finer qualities, I think.
This is the first time I've written multiple Jacks. Kind of fun!
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He sank against the door, something shifting inside, tilting disastrously.
This one, also, seems to sum up Jack's particular wisdom:
"Just go with it, mate. Spot o' rum'll set you up."
:)
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the mix of horror and matter-of-fact getting on with it
That is Jack all over, isn't it? One of his finer qualities, I think.
This is the first time I've written multiple Jacks. Kind of fun!
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