Fic: 'Hero' (2/6)

Sep 27, 2007 06:16


Many thanks to all of you who commented on the first chapter of Hero. Here's the second...

Chapter Two: Pirate Princeling )

hero, potcfic, challenge

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azulada September 27 2007, 15:37:19 UTC
"Oh, aye. Never could help that, really, from the day I met her, and it's just gotten worse over the years."

LOL. That pretty much sums it up! ;)

Another fine chapter. I love the interaction of Jamie and Jack. Jack handles fatherhood quite well.
Until the next...

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geekmama September 27 2007, 15:41:19 UTC
That pretty much sums it up! ;)

It does, doesn't it? I feel sure Jack would think so. Very happy you enjoyed the chapter! Thank you for letting me know. :)

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honorat September 27 2007, 15:47:39 UTC
*Snerk* Love the idea that men need to master swords to even the odds in the battle of wits with women. LOL. Where do I register for mathematics classes with Cap'n Jack? Hmmm? Pretty please?

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geekmama September 27 2007, 16:16:57 UTC
Math -- or 'maths', as woolymonkey assures me is correct -- with Jack on the Black Pearl would indeed be fun! So happy you're enjoying this!!

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ballincollig September 27 2007, 16:07:35 UTC
Oh!! Educated!Jack!!! My weakness!

Gah, and I'm such a sucker for paternal!Jack, too...

And this was my favorite passage, as I can clearly see the moon rising over the sea, looking as you described. How many times have I sat by the ocean with friends watching the moon, drinking, laughing, singing? Makes me pretty homesick, but in a good way:
On this voyage, and also for the first time, Uncle Jack let Jamie stay up as late as he wanted each night, to listen to the talk and music of the crew as the stars came out and the moon rose, butter gold in the east. Wild stories of the sea, bawdy portside tales, songs that ranged from hilarious to heartbreaking.

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geekmama September 27 2007, 16:20:31 UTC
Oh!! Educated!Jack!!! My weakness!

Mine too, as you know. Nights sailing on the Caribbean are pretty close to Heaven, and I expect that was the case back then, too. So happy you liked that part!

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geekmama September 27 2007, 16:22:49 UTC
No Elizabeth on hand for this adventure, though she may reappear in the Epilogue. So happy you're enjoying it! Thank you for letting me know. :D

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dharma_slut September 27 2007, 17:17:29 UTC
I am so enjoying this!

And don't you wish you had a childhood like James's? I sure do...

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geekmama September 27 2007, 17:25:42 UTC
Jamie has quite a support system. After I'm finished with this, I'm going to get back to Devil's Own Luck (finally!) and there'll be more about him, set a few years earlier.

I was wondering if everyone would like something so very PG. I'm so happy to know you're enjoying it!

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dharma_slut September 27 2007, 17:42:45 UTC
I like.. and this is very important... good writing *hands you roses*

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geekmama September 27 2007, 17:47:43 UTC
Thank you!

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