This Is Okay

[gdontop]

Rating: R (sexuality)
Pairing: GTOP
Disclaimer: I don't own them, but I AM going to see them in concert... hell yes I am.
Description: Jiyong wants Seunghyun to tell him this is okay. A decision in 925 words.

Comments

spot!

[dyealer]

I've read this on AFF beforehand...and I really love it~

I just fall simply in love with it~~

Re: spot!

[gdontop]

Thanks for reading/commenting twice, hehehe! I appreciate it :3

[heads_bang]

HOLY FUCKING SHIT THIS IS THE MOST PERFECT THING EVER~ ;A;
i read this on aff too but i really wanted to comment on here. i adore smut, but this... the expression of something so much more, of Seunghyun wanting him so bad but hesitant to verbalize it, and Jiyong pleading... ugh i just love that too much. haha sorry im rambling here...

but seriously... the "I want you" line killed me.

[gdontop]

I wish I could respond to comments on AFF (without it being a huge hassle >_<), so I'm glad you commented here! Thank you so much for the kind words :) I was feeling a bit shiftless last night, and then... well, this exercise in sexual tension is what resulted from 1/2 a bottle of wine and a lack of sleep :P

[scythegyen]

B-e-a-utiful! This was romanticly aww. And sweet.

[gdontop]

Thank you ^_^

[gdontop]

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[atenais_pala]

Oh, I loved it. I have to confess that in my mind the things between them will always start with some drinking together. Like people say, in vino veritas.

I really loved to see that Jiyong needed his consent, even if he was drunk.
Thank you for sharing!!!

[gdontop]

They do say "A drunk man's words are a sober man's thoughts", so I wanted to kind of play with the antithesis of that phrase.

Jiyong requiring consent... what a catalyst for Seunghyun's reaction :)

Thanks for commenting!

[atenais_pala]

No, thank you, for writing. I really enjoy your fanfics!