Comments | gdgdbaby: [oneshot] on your own

gdgdbaby

[oneshot] on your own

Jul 17, 2011 13:41

Title: on your own
Characters: fred, george, angelina, alicia, katie, lee, oliver
Rating: pg13
Genre: gen, slice-of-life
Warnings: swearing
Author: gdgdbaby
Notes: post-war george-centric fic. 1,340 words.

( He turns over on his narrow mattress with the comforter that'd always been too short and sleeps. And sleeps. And sleeps. )

length: oneshot, #fic, fandom: harry potter

Comments 15

nikkikoala90 July 17 2011, 18:19:08 UTC

WOW, WAY TO MAKE ME LITERALLY SOB, LUCY.
Seriously, though, your writing always moves me.

gdgdbaby July 19 2011, 01:57:42 UTC

I'M SO SORRY NIKKI ;__; HANDS YOU TISSUE. i'm so glad you liked this ♥ ty! :')

downonfire July 17 2011, 18:22:21 UTC

Amazing. I love the line "because Fred was his but he'd also been theirs." :)

gdgdbaby July 19 2011, 01:57:57 UTC

thank you so much! i'm so glad you enjoyed it :D

anonymous July 17 2011, 18:47:32 UTC

Somehow this cheered me up and depressed me at the same time.
Thank you.

gdgdbaby July 19 2011, 01:58:11 UTC

thank you. ♥

envoler July 17 2011, 22:26:51 UTC

omg lucy

the whole last paragraph is extremely perrrrfect. esp: because Fred was his but he'd also been theirs. it made me all kinds of teary and just :( why must you do this to me :(

can you write hp fic more often!!!

gdgdbaby July 19 2011, 01:58:51 UTC

sob. oh fred. ;__; WHY'D HE HAVE TO DIE, DAMMIT.

ahhhh i will try! maybe i'll make a prompt post sometime this week, we shall see~

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gdgdbaby July 19 2011, 01:59:22 UTC

thank you so much! i'm really glad you liked the focus on the secondary/tertiary characters. ♥ :D