[oneshot] a friendly kind of fighting

[gdgdbaby]

Title: a friendly kind of fighting
Pairing: chanyeol/chen
Rating: nc17
Genre: au, slice-of-life
Warnings: swearing, fisticuffs, sex
Author: gdgdbaby
Notes: advent calendar day 4, for herocountry. hs varsity football au. 1,831 words.

Comments

[jen_fin]

i feel bad commenting before the person it's written for. please show up in the next three minutes as i type this. ;;

like i said, i was basically mentally screaming "BOYS STOP NO BAD DON'T PUT THAT IN UR MOUTH" at the end there. i still am puzzled by this ship. ?____? BY THE WAY YOU SAID FOOTBALL AND I THOUGHT AMERICAN FOOTBALL AND WAS JUST "HOW IS IT 1 TO 1? HOW? TWENTY MINUTES INTO THE SECOND HALF? WHY DOES CHANYEOL EXPECT THE BALL TO LAND AT HIS FEET?" and then i understood and i felt so fucking dumb

jongdae is the biggest shit alive. if i had been chanyeol i would have happily have pushed that little shit down some stairs omg. fuck that guy￢o(￣-￣ﾒ)
20934820431 points to chanyeol for coming all over his face. all the facials for jongdae

whisper whisper who wins the tournament tho?

[gdgdbaby]

LOL jenny you're so cute :') i'm so glad you liked this!! SORRY ABOUT THE FOOTBALL/FOOTBALL CONFUSION LMAOSDLJF i'm so glad you liked this even tho ur ?__? about chenyeol kekeke

(good q... possible sequel ideas (jk))

[yeolie]

"Because he was-what? Too little for the refs to see?"
lmfao best line

"There's a neat purple cleat imprint right beneath his left nipple."
That is a really nice visual *_*

Also, baek stepping on his foot, how childish. i love it

I also liked the facial (~my bad~) and chen subsequently using cy's bed sheets to clean it off

huhuhu beagle line antics

[gdgdbaby]

BEAGLE LINE BEST LINE who is anyone else

no but sklfjads lmao i'm so glad you liked this!!! physically boisterous boys 5ever kekeke they're all idiots :')

[herocountry]

HELLO I AM HERE (Lucy tone) lksdjflkasdjflksj this is SO CUTE I'M SO PLEASED reading this i realize i care way more abt exo fic than actual exo activities bc this was so *_____* I'M SO PLEASED!!!!!!!!!!! *_________* ALSO CHANYEOL/CHEN MY CHINGULINE RAREPAIR. dead straight from the start because Kim Jongdae from Yongsan International fucking kungfu kicks him in the abdomen and the broken umbrella imagery AND THE SOCCER REFERENCES like not that i understand them but au details... are my fav... baekhyun's tiny shrill yapping from offscreen.... *___* TOO LITTLE FOR THE REFS TO SEE CAN HE SAY THAT TO JONGDAE'S FACE THOUGH and ofc they're family friends omg. lksdjflsjfklsjf i gss at least chanyeol got chen back at the end (eheheheheh) though He thrusts in as deep as he can. CHANYEOL U DICK!!!!!!!!

[gdgdbaby]

LOL HELLO TORI lsfkjsd this qt comment :'))) AND THE SOCCER REFERENCES like not that i understand them but au details... are my fav... LMAO ILU and ofc i had to include baek somewhere even if it was just random potshots at pcy heh heh. i'm so glad you liked this!!! :***

[fashcndy]

WAILS. this was perfect.

how do you excel in all the aus? everyone you write is written like you live directly in each reality. Are you secretly omnipresent?

[gdgdbaby]

NOOO this comment is too kind sob ♥ i did, however, play high school soccer, so that does come into play here n__n i'm so glad you enjoyed this!!

[theafterimages]

I love this! The two of them giving each other so much shit about everything was just so much fun to read, and of course the porn was great.

[gdgdbaby]

eeee thank you so much!! chenyeol being dicks to each other is so great, i'm really pleased that you enjoyed this :D