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FIC: Teamwork 14 (HP/DM)

Sep 04, 2009 14:12

Title: Teamwork 14 -- Alternatives
Chapter Rating: PG-13
Chapter Summary: Harry and Draco search for a mixed-house meeting place, a retreat, and a place to brew. Oh, and try to look like they're behaving.
Canon Compliancy: Through Goblet of Fire
Snakes and Lions: Teamwork is the sequel to Snakes and Lions.
Notes: Thanks to sociofemme for beta work. ( Read more... )

wip, my fic, pg, teamwork

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hitsuzen_hime September 4 2009, 19:53:32 UTC

OMG your back! I was just rereading all your stories yesterday and worrying because you havent posted since Azkatraz and here you are with a new chappy! You have no idea how happy it makes me to see you back and writing on this story! I've got to go off and read it now, feedback laters! Yay!

hitsuzen_hime September 4 2009, 20:50:01 UTC

Great Chapter! I was really pleased to see Harry and Draco working on their charm and charisma rather than simply spelling Myrtle to obey (though I noticed that was the first instinct). Also I really like the lead up on the change in Harry's relationship with Slytherin and Snape. I do, however, think it's kind of wierd how 'adult' Harry has gotten to be all of a sudden. Sometimes it seems like he treats Severus more like an equal than anything and that's always a little jarring especially when Sev lets him get away with it. The relationship between those two is complicated and exiting and I love how you write your Snape. I'm suprised at how the rest of the school administration didn't like the idea of an 'uncommon' room but it will be fun to watch the boys circumvent the rules to get what they want anyway. Looking forward to the next chapter.

gatewaygirl September 5 2009, 16:31:00 UTC

Snape goes back and forth on how he treats Harry, depending on whether he's thinking of him as a student or an ally that he's cultivating. That was already established by summer (and recall, they had more summer contact than I showed), but now Harry is expecting it.

We have only Snape's report of what the rest of the staff thought. There may have been a few people quietly considering the matter, whom he either didn't notice or didn't mention. Snape, like Dumbledore, always has plans.

gatewaygirl September 5 2009, 16:31:34 UTC

Oh, and thank you for commenting!

gatewaygirl September 5 2009, 16:16:34 UTC

Yeah, I had a couple of RL vacatations, spent a long time working on the sticky post guide to my fics, and then embarked on this behemoth fic that is currently 33,000 words, and I think about 3/4 done.

I'd say things will go back to normal now, but they never do! :-)

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