Comments | gate_ship: Voyage of the Dawn Treader 1/?

gate_ship

Voyage of the Dawn Treader 1/?

Aug 15, 2009 09:33

Title: The Voyage of the Dawn Treader

Summary: Lucy and Edmund are not the only Pevensie children to return to Narnia after all.

Characters/Pairings: Caspian/Susan, Peter, Edmund, Lucy, Eustace, etc.

Author’s Note: Uh, I really don’t even own much of the plot in this one or even much of the dialogue. Well, until the Caspian/Susan subplot ( Read more... )

book: chronicles of narnia, ship narnia: caspian/susan, fic, fic: vodt

Comments 5

ladyhawke01 August 15 2009, 16:15:35 UTC

That was great. Please continue soon, you cannot leave it like that.

gate_ship August 15 2009, 22:54:13 UTC

Oh I definitely plan on continuing it. I just need to find the book in my messy room.

ladyhawke01 August 15 2009, 23:28:23 UTC

Well I hope you find it soon. lol You left us with a great cliffhanger.

hairsprayheart August 23 2009, 21:33:17 UTC

I liked this so far. My only complaint is that for most of this chapter, it simply regurgitated the plot of VoDT, with a little AU stuff mixed in - as AU fic has the tendency to do - but I suppose that's how it has to be whenever a fic first starts out. I would like to see more character development, which I'm sure you will do in the coming chapters :) I look forward to seeing where you go with this!

gate_ship August 23 2009, 22:20:25 UTC

It's going to be the book for a little while. As Susan and Caspian get more angsty and awkward, they'll be more changes. I'm also going to add some stuff that's just glossed over in the book.