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[fic] Before Summer's Over - 1/2

Feb 07, 2012 18:57

Title: Before Summer's Over
Author: garnetice
Pairing: Kendall/James
Rating: M
Word Count: 3,217 (9,505 total)
Part: One of Two
Warnings: Drinking, sex, naughty words, boys being dicks to girls and each other
Summary: James is a virgin. James is not super pleased about that.
Disclaimer: BTR is not mine.
Author Notes: Old fic. I fully acknowledge this is ( Read more... )

james maslow has voodoo eyes, my boyband is better than yours bb, fic: i write it, kendall schmidt can rock my world

Comments 3

default_dollie February 8 2012, 00:44:42 UTC

I asked for unlikable Kendall and here he is!

If only his stupid mother hadn’t instilled all these silly, romantic notions in his head about true love and respect and waiting until he’s ready. I love that James is the one who has these beliefs. It's sorta like him and traditional Kendall have swapped bodies.

Who even are you? I can’t believe you just said that. Out loud. Where other people can hear. I agree. Who is this boy? Is he a shape-shifter? :) I can picture Kendall being a pig, but he'd been doing it in a not-so-public place, like the guys' locker room or even his own bedroom.

It’s like James isn’t even there. That sound you hear is my heartbreaking- again. Only for you will I voluntarily let it be done.

Repeatedly.

eviljellybean88 February 8 2012, 18:54:59 UTC

i love this james, really i do, virgin!james may be my new favorite thing and i kind of really love douche!kendall XD

thilia March 2 2012, 13:26:50 UTC

Awwwww! I love this. I like dick!Kendall. Well, I don't like him, but... this is awesome. I love it. I think I've mentioned that.

Also, sorry about the comment!spam you're getting here, but... reviews are a good thing? :D

Also, this made me giggle:

Maybe sex can be something he builds up to. James is the kind of guy who likes to ease into the pool instead of cannonball on a sunny, clear day. He likes procedure. He mostly blames it on Logan; they’ve been friends for so long that all his caution has rubbed off. And sex has to happen in steps, right? Steps are good. James is excellent at following directions. He put together some of the Knights’ Ikea furniture all on his own and everything.

And the bodyshot? Holy fucking hell. Sexiest thing ever.

Poor James. Poooooor poor James.

Gotta read more now.