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[TXT] brb, laughing codename_fire May 5 2011, 05:39:25 UTC
What genre is this?

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Re: [TXT] best seller sweetlyangelic May 5 2011, 05:42:05 UTC
romance

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[TXT] BUT THERE'S NOT ENOUGH DENIAL. And whiplash. codename_fire May 5 2011, 05:44:55 UTC
I see.

Perhaps if you had more written? It...sounds intriguing.

[Oh Noin, why you trying to encourage this awful, you know its awful, everyone probably knows its awful. Probably because you're secretly laughing too. But she's not one to put anyone down.]

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Re: [TXT] crying sweetlyangelic May 5 2011, 05:50:22 UTC
thnx! ppl will love this!

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Text magus_knight May 5 2011, 05:40:43 UTC
[Does not want to admit she reads romance novels. Does not want to admit she reads romance novels...]

You have some typos. Like in the first sentence. Wrong pronoun.

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Re: Text sweetlyangelic May 5 2011, 05:43:21 UTC
where? i dont see it.

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Text magus_knight May 5 2011, 05:46:58 UTC
That's because you just edited it.

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Re: Text sweetlyangelic May 5 2011, 05:49:19 UTC
no i didnt

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[Voice] note_atem May 5 2011, 05:55:11 UTC
....

This is for a job? [WHAT. WHAT IS THIS? /COUGH. OH. UM. YEAH WELL.]

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Re: [Voice] // [text] sweetlyangelic May 5 2011, 05:57:42 UTC
hey atem!! and yes.

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[Voice] // [text] note_atem May 5 2011, 05:58:33 UTC
It's ... [Oh yes a pause. He's just not sure what the heck he read or why.]

Interesting. [Yeah. That's about all he can say.]

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Re: [Voice] // [text] sweetlyangelic May 5 2011, 06:00:17 UTC
im glad u enjoyed it. i still have plenty to write. this is only a rough draft.

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[video idk] all_range_mode May 5 2011, 05:57:53 UTC
[oh god my virgin puppydog eyes]

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Re: [video idk] sweetlyangelic May 5 2011, 06:00:46 UTC
[GOTTA LEARN ABOUT THAT STUFF SOMETIME, FOXIE.]

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Re: [video idk] all_range_mode May 5 2011, 06:03:18 UTC
[NO NEVER.]

This isn't the sort of thing you should broadcast to the general public!

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Re: [video idk] // [text] sweetlyangelic May 5 2011, 06:06:03 UTC
why? i need opinions. if u dont like, dont look.

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umbrelladouche May 5 2011, 06:01:52 UTC
Was she laying on her back? If so it wouldn't make sense for the blood to end up between her boobs, the blood would flow off the side of her neck and onto the bed.

Also, if you use words like "enormous", it just sounds goofy.

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sweetlyangelic May 5 2011, 06:04:49 UTC
[how dare you talk bad about my ~*masterpiece*~]

im sure it can be possible

what else am i suppose to say? big breasts sound stupid too

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umbrelladouche May 5 2011, 06:08:52 UTC
Voluptuous bosoms.

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sweetlyangelic May 5 2011, 06:10:28 UTC
He tugged the ribbon of her corset, exposing her voluptuous bosoms and immediately gained an arousal.

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