[TXT] BUT THERE'S NOT ENOUGH DENIAL. And whiplash.codename_fireMay 5 2011, 05:44:55 UTC
I see.
Perhaps if you had more written? It...sounds intriguing.
[Oh Noin, why you trying to encourage this awful, you know its awful, everyone probably knows its awful. Probably because you're secretly laughing too. But she's not one to put anyone down.]
Was she laying on her back? If so it wouldn't make sense for the blood to end up between her boobs, the blood would flow off the side of her neck and onto the bed.
Also, if you use words like "enormous", it just sounds goofy.
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Perhaps if you had more written? It...sounds intriguing.
[Oh Noin, why you trying to encourage this awful, you know its awful, everyone probably knows its awful. Probably because you're secretly laughing too. But she's not one to put anyone down.]
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You have some typos. Like in the first sentence. Wrong pronoun.
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This is for a job? [WHAT. WHAT IS THIS? /COUGH. OH. UM. YEAH WELL.]
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Interesting. [Yeah. That's about all he can say.]
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This isn't the sort of thing you should broadcast to the general public!
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Also, if you use words like "enormous", it just sounds goofy.
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im sure it can be possible
what else am i suppose to say? big breasts sound stupid too
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