"Malamute" (Sherlock Holmes, July 24 prompt)

Jul 24, 2011 02:12

Title: Malamute
Author: gardnerhill
Rating: G
Characters: ACD Sherlock Holmes, John Watson
Summary: April 1919.
Warnings: Angst.
Word Count: 800
Author's Notes: For the July 24 prompt (Pick one of the four seasons and write about a storm during that season.).

Tell the sky to turn a blind eye. )

watsons woes july prompt

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rabidsamfan July 24 2011, 12:13:31 UTC
Oh, my, gosh. That is amazing. Glorious. Beautiful. I'm going to print it out and add it to my permanent collection.

Wow.

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gardnerhill July 24 2011, 17:55:52 UTC
...Wow myself. I'm honored. This just tumbled out of me. Thank you.

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cookiefleck July 24 2011, 14:38:21 UTC
Beautiful, sad, heartwarming, and I could picture everything as I read it.

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gardnerhill July 24 2011, 17:57:52 UTC
Thanks - I was trying to go for that full-body sensation of being outside in a storm. (I was nearly done when I realized I'd forgotten to add the wind! Went back and fixed that.)

And I knew Holmes would come up with an oblique way to let Watson know that he does not think he's a coward for being afraid of the noise.

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donutsweeper July 24 2011, 15:22:30 UTC
Oh wow. Utterly amazing.

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gardnerhill July 24 2011, 17:59:03 UTC
Thank you. (This was supposed to end with a hot bath and some snuggling, but the story wouldn't let me. That was a horrific war and the scars remain to this day.)

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methylviolet10b July 24 2011, 22:29:08 UTC
Wow. This is utterly wrenching and absolutely fabulous.

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gardnerhill July 25 2011, 02:22:05 UTC
Thank you. (Hell, this wrenched ME while I was writing it, so I knew it was gonna work.)

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scotlandyarder July 25 2011, 03:25:43 UTC
This is gorgeous. I know no better word. Beautiful, beautiful job.

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gardnerhill July 25 2011, 06:04:37 UTC
Thank you so much.

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