Three's Company

[game_byrd]

Title: Three's Company
Words: 4,500
Characters: Sylar/Claire/Peter, Maury Parkman
Rating: NC-17 for graphic sexual content
Dedication: Written for dancingdragon3
Setting: Shattered Salvation, May 2011

Notes: If the parts within the mental construct seem a bit contrived and the characterization there is off, that's intentional. It's a mental projection,

Comments

[means2bhuman]

Urk...
I think the term is 'in my bunk?'
You're going to need to revive my muse - he's in a coma now.
("Peter, you know CPR, right?")

[game_byrd]

OMG, where is that line from? Isn't "Peter, you know CPR, right?" from one of our fics? I can't place it though.

Heh. This was one of those incredibly dirty little fics that I hadn't had the nerve to write ... before. And as you know, unbeta'd and all that. Honestly I'm still pretty embarrassed about it.

Glad you liked it.

[means2bhuman]

You emailed me this, you dirty girl ;)
http://28.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_l7dzbtoiVv1qcpz05o1_400.jpg

[game_byrd]

Oh. Yeah.

No wonder it was familiar.

:D That one was pretty funny too.

Comments, the first

[dancingdragon3]

I had to read this twice, because the first time, I was too embarrassed to read the dirty parts. I want to first say how wonderfully written it is. I feel like I am reading part of a published novel, so bravo for easy reading! You are really churning out some quality work!

I liked how you had Claire torture Sylar first. Nice touch. Very much what she would do, she's got some dark violence in her.

I also like the nod to Gretchen. I thought that explanation was very in character, and I liked that Claire's real private life is taken under consideration. I have no idea how old Claire is supposed to be here, but it is obvious that she has matured.

Now to re-read the sexy parts again! I have just been too embarrassed to let my self get into them, but I'm ready now! Open a window, you may hear some Squeeing!

Re: Comments, the first

[game_byrd]

Claire's supposed to be about 20, maybe 21 here. So yes, she's matured a bit. Season 4 ended around December, 2009 (ish) and this is set May 2011. She was a freshman in college in season 4, so now she's a sophomore (well, actually she dropped out and went to work for the Company, but that's not the point).

[vivihanna]

Great writing as usual. As for the subject matter, I think my icon speaks for my reaction, lol. :P

[game_byrd]

Hah! Glad you liked it.

My Peter-muse is like "high five!" to Sylar-muse who is "Peter, cut it out. I only did that for you."
Peter: "Oh, come on, that wasn't that bad!"
Sylar: "What is it with you and your whole family and incest? I have Nathan's memories. That sort of ... that's gross."
Peter snorts. "You're with *me*! I was his brother. And who are you to talk? You don't even know for sure who you're related to."
Sylar ponders that quietly.

[vivihanna]

Hehe, cute muses you got there! :)

Like Dancingdragon, I was kinda embarrassed reading this. I kept looking around nervously even though no one is here but the cats right now. It's because I think of Claire as sweet and innocent, like a little sister perhaps. I never usually read sexual stuff with her in it. Even though your writing is amazing, my guilt wouldn't let me fully enjoy reading this, strange isn't it? I liked it, I just couldn't relax reading it no matter how hard I tried, if that makes any sense. Please don't kill me. *Cowers* :o

So yeah, the things I can't fully enjoy reading are sexual Claire, Peter/Nathan, and Sylar/Luke. The other day I read something new, Peter/Matt and that was alright I suppose. I think Matt goes best with Mohinder though, they are such a cute couple. :)

As for three ways, I've read a few Sylar/Peter/Mohinder before but Sylar/Peter/Gabriel (from Lana's universe) is my favorite. Oh man, I can't imagine how hot you could make a fic with those three in it, it would be awesome! *Wink, nudge* :D

[game_byrd]

I was embarrassed writing it! Why is that? I thought for the longest time it was because it was too author-insert, but once I got to writing it, Claire's voice came out and it clearly wasn't (at least, as far as I'm concerned). But I'm still embarrassed about it.

Is it the DP? The kink? The incest?

[dancingdragon3]

Guh. Smurfle

[dancingdragon3]

Did I mention how hot it was? I swear my face was three inches from the screen by the end and my hands were covering my mouth in glee!

Loved Sylar and her and him touching her just briefly and it was so hot hot hot!!

[game_byrd]

Having Sylar be there mostly for Peter (and not so much for her) made him a lot less threatening for Claire.

My muse for Sylar still thinks that whole scene was one of the most disgusting things he's ever done for anyone, but no one's really listening to him at the moment.

[game_byrd]

One question - why is Peter avoiding her breasts? It didn't bother me, just noticed it and figured there had to be a reason.

um ... I don't know. Peter's fine with breasts. He can take 'em or leave 'em and he likes to look at them a lot more than he likes to touch them, but ... for some reason I started to write the usual 'see and grope' and Peter was like 'nope - want my hands on her hips' and I said 'okay'. I think he'd just rather watch them move and jiggle than put his hands on them directly. I think I've explained how I don't understand my own muses at times (though in this convoluted case, it's Claire's imaginary version of Peter so ... I don't know what effect that has

[regazzadilupo]

Woo! I'm not a big incest fan, but this was *hoooooot*. My love of threesomes wins out, I guess, that and your writing.

[game_byrd]

Glad you liked it! So you're a big threesome fan, eh? I've got another one simmering on the back burner. I'll see if I can't get it written.

[regazzadilupo]

Heh, who ISN'T a threesome fan? Will it be in the Shattered Salvation universe?

[game_byrd]

Sort of. I'll probably set it up as a dream or a fantasy, like the above, because the characters in question are like "NO."