You've returned the favor and have perked me up during this NM (big boss) hunt I have to attend on Final Fantasy 14 (online game). Thank you so much! <3
I almost wonder if Sylar wouldn't have tried to cover it after he realized his 'error'. Like, "You...should make...toast." and be totally lame about his answer, not...really helping...but he might try
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I love Peter screwing it up (might just be my dirty mind)--"Well, I was talking about what we might eat- um, food, you know?"--...I can't even type it, its way too nasty!
Hahah. If it hadn't been a drabble (100 words) I would have gone further in that. :D
"Well, I was talking about what we might eat."
Sylar, deciding what the hell, he might as well push it, repeats, "You?"
Peter gapes and Sylar thinks he went too far for a moment again, but then Peter's expression morphs into a blushing grin and he says, "I meant food, you know
( ... )
I am seriously in love with your wall verse drabbles. Wall verse is quickly becoming one of my favorite things in Heroes fanfic, anyway, but these are just *great*.
I read the 5 Wall Verse Short Stories, very beautiful, especially the 2-3-4! The Drabbles are too short, always leave you with the question "what next"?? sigh! -_-' In effect I agree with "means2bhuman" (I mean the first Drabble on this page) you could not continue it aside, not a Drabble, but a story in itself? is too cute! ^ _ ^ I am recently in the community, and I saw that you wrote a lot about them (I am in the course of reading ..). I think you are very good, especially on their characterization. English is not my native language but your stories are among those that I understand better .. or so it seems to me eheheh! :) - you write very well. I'm also reading "More Between Us Than A Wall ". Very very nice great job. Well! I like this thing's point of view! Again compliments and forgive all mistakes i made. I hope you understand the whole ... it was a fatigue for me to write so much ç_ç (poor me .. will improve ..) ha! Sylar / Peter is also my favorite pair .. the only one in reality. ^_^
Wow, thank you so much for all the comments! Especially if English is not your native language. I'm glad to hear you like my writing. I know the drabbles are short, but sometimes that's all I have time for.
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You've returned the favor and have perked me up during this NM (big boss) hunt I have to attend on Final Fantasy 14 (online game). Thank you so much! <3
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Hahah. If it hadn't been a drabble (100 words) I would have gone further in that. :D
"Well, I was talking about what we might eat."
Sylar, deciding what the hell, he might as well push it, repeats, "You?"
Peter gapes and Sylar thinks he went too far for a moment again, but then Peter's expression morphs into a blushing grin and he says, "I meant food, you know ( ... )
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It's mine too, but I confess to having something of a one-track mind.
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Nathan is a bit creepy-looking, now that you mention it.
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In effect I agree with "means2bhuman" (I mean the first Drabble on this page) you could not continue it aside, not a Drabble, but a story in itself? is too cute! ^ _ ^
I am recently in the community, and I saw that you wrote a lot about them (I am in the course of reading ..). I think you are very good, especially on their characterization.
English is not my native language but your stories are among those that I understand better .. or so it seems to me eheheh! :) - you write very well.
I'm also reading "More Between Us Than A Wall ". Very very nice great job.
Well! I like this thing's point of view!
Again compliments and forgive all mistakes i made. I hope you understand the whole ... it was a fatigue for me to write so much ç_ç (poor me .. will improve ..)
ha! Sylar / Peter is also my favorite pair .. the only one in reality. ^_^
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