Bricks in the Wall, Chapter 87: Give Me An Inch
Three connected stories.
Title: Give Me An Inch
Characters: Peter, Sylar
Words: 500
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Setting: The Wall
Summary: Peter gives Sylar a little coaching on how to get him in the mood.
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I like seeing their POVs back-to-back: Peter being appreciative of Sylar's body and Sylar being self-conscious.
I really like the concept of baby-smooth skin from regen! It works with canon (I mean, those people look smooth and soft!) and that silly line from Lydia about Sylar's skn being "soft as a baby." (I think Sylar getting a skin peel a la Samuel Sullivan's sandstorm might be the most recent thing…)
"he stepped nearer and oh-so-gently gathered Peter into his arms. Peter tilted his head up and to one side. Sylar matched him. They'd done this before, too, just fully clothed and not in a shower. This kiss wasn't as tentative as that one had been. Sylar knew Peter's taste now. He knew the way his skin smelled up close. He knew the way Peter kissed him repeatedly rather than continuously, and how the little man mixed it up by sucking on his lips and teasing with his tongue. Sylar curled his hand behind Peter's head to cradle it and hold him there."
I love all of that. I can see them both moving slowly, but the motions are familiar and it's different this time because they're finally on the same page and moving forward.
"Then he just let Peter go to town, giving him a sudsy hand job while rubbing one out himself, in the same … handful. Sylar even smiled as he watched. It was simple, friendly … boyish was another word that came to his mind. He could imagine a couple Boy Scouts or other adolescents helping each other out like this. His mother had always said those organizations were rife with perverted behavior. He chuckled at how right she might have been. Maybe that was where Peter learned all this." I love this, too! My muse was very close to the screen, wondering, "How did she know I thought that?" So, in my opinion, you got it totally right. He sees frotting at two dicks having sex with each other or a…double handjob. And the taboo/naughtiness-yet-innocence of Boy Scouts/adolescents is spot on! I know Peter didn't learn it from the Boy Scouts but that's a hilarious thought! (Imagine Nathan freaking out if he ever heard that!) That was the primary reason for this third comment because I needed to remark on it.
"He pumped faster, not caring if Sylar kept up with him. He squeezed their organs together, feeling their ridges sliding up and down, the lather frothy and hot.
Sylar could feel Peter straining and flexing under him. Neck muscles corded and jumped, his hands frigged them together faster and faster. He was right on the cusp of coming, but tried to hold it off until Peter popped. He hooked one arm around Peter's head, pulling it to the side to completely expose his shoulder and neck. Sylar littered it with bites and love marks. "Every time I look at you, I want to see these," he murmured between marks. "I want to know we were together. I want to fuck you and suck on these when I do it-"
I love Peter losing it and not caring if Sylar keeps up. Peter may be have the situation 'in hand', but Sylar gets to control the kissing/biting and talking ;) That dirty talk, his honest, possessive desires are awesome and accurate. So hot.
"Sylar turned him, kissed him savagely hard, owning him through his mouth, and came as well. Sylar pressed him against the wall, rubbing his whole body up and down on Peter, smearing them both with lather and ejaculate, while nuzzling at Peter's face affectionately. Peter smiled lazily and returned it, thinking he'd never seen Sylar act quite like that."
That's cool. Sylar understands that he can do what he wants because Peter will at least allow it or at best, enjoy it, which he does. And Peter notices that's difference behavior and feels warm fuzzies.
"Sylar breathed out heavily. "I have wanted to fuck you since the moment I saw you on the road, with that pipe." He rubbed his cheek against Peter's like a cat."
That response is the best! Sylar's mind probably went right to the gutter, never mind the pipe, or fuck me with/while you hold the pipe. Just "Hi, Peter. You're the best thing I've ever seen right now, please do me?"
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I'm pretty sure you've said something in MBU about the Boy Scouts and perverted possibilities, so I don't claim that as original. I don't think Peter would be an Eagle Scout, either. It's quite a commitment in terms of family time and scheduling, but if you think of it as canon, I can roll with it just fine. I'll just make sure Peter has a few more outdoorsy skills than I would have otherwise. I think the only canon reference to it is Sylar referencing Peter as the Italian Eagle Scout sarcastically to Matt Parkman. I think it was while they were in the airport and Matt was foiling Sylar's plans to reunite with his body.
I can't wait until the guys get to carnal knowledge of one another in MBU.
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