well,it's been busy and hectic here,so I was later getting through all this than intended,but I love how this has been organized and how Clair and other characters were used.Can totally see how Peter would get something like this set up and run it in this manner.Usually I don't like to get bogged down in how things are organized,but this turned out nicely and was well thought out!
I have a pet peeve with stories where Sylar gets away with all he's done. I admit I've written a few myself, but I've been more satisfied with the ones where I felt he was going to pay his debt in some manner. Otherwise, it feels like a cheat. All those people he killed mattered and not just the ones the audience was sympathetic to. The only deaths he might get a bye on would be self-defense, but even then it shouldn't be resisting lawful authority or in the course of committing some other crime. It's the completely senseless/avoidable ones that bothered me the most, like the tow truck driver when he was possessing Matt Parkman. But Nathan ranks pretty highly, too. Sylar had all his powers and was facing one annoying human who had nothing going for him but a pretty face, his fists, and flight. Stopping to kill him was so unnecessary
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Thank you so much for letting me know that! I understand being bogged down - I've had a number of real life issues come up that have trumped writing for a while. I hope I get back to it, though!
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I have a pet peeve with stories where Sylar gets away with all he's done. I admit I've written a few myself, but I've been more satisfied with the ones where I felt he was going to pay his debt in some manner. Otherwise, it feels like a cheat. All those people he killed mattered and not just the ones the audience was sympathetic to. The only deaths he might get a bye on would be self-defense, but even then it shouldn't be resisting lawful authority or in the course of committing some other crime. It's the completely senseless/avoidable ones that bothered me the most, like the tow truck driver when he was possessing Matt Parkman. But Nathan ranks pretty highly, too. Sylar had all his powers and was facing one annoying human who had nothing going for him but a pretty face, his fists, and flight. Stopping to kill him was so unnecessary ( ... )
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