Comments | game_byrd: Broken Connections, Chapter Three: Broken World

game_byrd

Broken Connections, Chapter Three: Broken World

Mar 10, 2014 21:55

( Read more... )

Comments 5

cheetobuzz March 11 2014, 04:26:14 UTC

hmmmm,"you have a lot to answer for in your choice of lovers, Peter" that's a good wrap up to something interesting,but not seeming to be quite done yet....

game_byrd March 11 2014, 04:31:30 UTC

Oh no - it's like a 40,000 word story. There's still six more chapters to come!

cheetobuzz March 11 2014, 22:05:45 UTC

well,it's obviously not done yet,and I'm antsy as to how this will get written out....:)

means2bhuman April 9 2014, 03:06:55 UTC

"I had better be the most important person in your life at the moment, Peter," -- I adore that line. Sylar means it ( ... )

game_byrd April 9 2014, 03:29:11 UTC

Oh! Disapproving Angela has to be the worst! Especially since we've seen how loving and supportive she can be at other times. Disapproving Arthur would be pretty bad (with a big side order of threat/intimidation), but since I never saw him be in the least nice to Peter, I think Peter would get defensive and angry about Arthur rather than hurt and affected like he probably was with Angela ( ... )