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Bricks in the Wall, Chapter 43: Sparring

Mar 08, 2013 21:00

Title: Sparring
Characters: Sylar, Peter Petrelli
Rating: PG
Warnings: Mild violence and sexual innuendo
Word count: 400
Setting: The Wall
Summary: Peter tries to play, but Sylar isn't sure how.
Notes: Look, a Peter-pounce!

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bricks, sylar, peter, rated pg

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means2bhuman March 16 2013, 04:54:51 UTC

I thought this was really unique. It wasn't quite...any one fic theme - flirty, sexy, playful, dangerous, funny, serious, story-telling. It's, for lack of a better term, "a good scene." It does what it's supposed to do, catches your attention, makes you want more, and it advances the plot even if we don't know where it's going (and that's half the fun ( ... )