Bricks in the Wall, Chapter 35: Private Messaging

[game_byrd]

Title: Private Messaging
Rating: NC-17
Warning: Explicit sexual content, mildly passive aggressive BS
Words: 1,400
Setting: The Wall
Summary: Sylar has managed to weasel his way into Peter's bed. Now he continues his plot of working his way onto Peter's dick.

Comments

[dancingdragon3]

Love it! Hot yet sweet, too.

I'm putting this in the "Sneaky Sylar" section of your Bricks fics, along with the Sylar gets Peter drunk and humps him into fucking him, Butter Butt, that crying/hugging turns into kissing, slapping, humping in the petunias one, and the pillow wall one. Hmm, I suppose the hair combing might go there as well. But that's really in the "Peter turns out to be a freak" section, along with the blindfold/toe sucking one.

I have to agree that next to the Petrelli mind fuck, getting molested by Sylar in your sleep is not even in the same category. That was so funny that you made the comparison! I lol'd.

Very happy to see Peter getting into it and giving a reach around. I have to ask, though, why the heck didn't Sylar jack himself off those other times?! Does he get into having blue balls, or what? Ha!

Thanks for sharing another Brick. I love these!

[game_byrd]

Sylar's very ... repressed here. He actually believes that crap that he's doing this for Peter's own good. He doesn't see or admit his own motives, which is the twisted part. So with that frame of mind, Sylar wouldn't touch himself directly, but he'd *really* get off on being touched.

[cheetobuzz]

oooh!I like this one,and I agree with DD3.I happen to like and identify with sneaksy type characters,as I'm often accused of being so myself.Love hearing how the frames of thought work out for either character written about or referred to,as I've got a bit of a kink for being a fly on the wall for things....:p

[game_byrd]

Glad you like it. I imagined this initially from Peter's point of view, but eventually decided to write it from Sylar's.

This works as a chapter, but in any sort of 'reality', Peter would have a lot of things to say and do about the whole thing that make it less emotionally engaging. Which was why I switched it to Sylar's POV, where I didn't have to worry over those issues so much.

[game_byrd]

Yay! He's very sexy.

[means2bhuman]

This one was so strange to read! We're actively writing MBU where this could *actually happen*! It's exciting and familiar and unexpected and my muse is slightly anxious about it. I don't know that I've ever had a reaction like this to any MBU-inspired stuff - interesting

[game_byrd]

Yeah, I've been really surprised about the direction MBU is taking! It's getting more intimate with less resolved between them than I'd expected. My Peter-muse has a *bunch* of things he wants to talk to/confront Sylar about, but the time is very much 'not right' and he sees that. He's working Mazlow's hierarchy at the moment - getting Sylar to eat, drink, and himself to sleep safely. Much as Peter wants to, he's not planning on trying for resolution on higher-order emotional things until the basics are well covered. But in the meantime they're getting so cozy together it's amazing!

That's automatically an interesting situation (and a tough moral call, almost a lose-lose). Yeah, it really is. I've touched on that before in fics, that the guy with his dick inside the other person is in a really difficult place to claim rape, molestation, or being taking advantage of. For a lot of reasons, I'm sure Sylar would love to get Peter into that place.

it works to inform us that Peter's feeling...put-upon.I'd envisioned this initially from

[lornrocks]

Ah yes, very good. I like this progression. (I know I'm reading your fics in reverse order, but I can't help but feel like I've read this before. Maybe I have and forgot to comment?)

[game_byrd]

I'm so glad you're reading and commenting! I usually reread my fic when people comment and ... well, I like reading my own stuff. I'm glad you like the progression.