Comments | game_byrd: Sexual Tension Chapter 13: Quite a Handful

game_byrd

Sexual Tension Chapter 13: Quite a Handful

Dec 12, 2012 17:43

Title: Quite a Handful
Characters: Sylar, Peter
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Word count: 1,400
Setting: The Wall, Sexual Tension AU
Summary: Peter fumes over Sylar projecting; Sylar projects his insecurities onto Peter. They're quite a pair. Written for the 2012 Advent Calendar.

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sylar, advent calendar, !fandom: heroes, peter, sexual tension, rated pg

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game_byrd December 13 2012, 03:47:23 UTC

Yeah, I used to have the *worst* review-envy. But I've resigned myself to the fact that I write in a small and dwindling fandom, and any reviews I get are awesome. I love and adore every comment that comes my way. Thank you for leaving one!

Also, I'm super-glad that you "got" the emotional arc/roller coaster Peter is dealing with inside his head even though most of the POV here was from Sylar. Peter's not trying to be indifferent. He's just got a lot of issues to sort through. Sylar threw this scenario at Peter and forced him to deal with something he just wasn't ready to deal with. That's going to have some fallout as Peter figures out how he feels about himself after all this.

cheetobuzz December 13 2012, 18:09:04 UTC

hello,fan here who's also appreciatively envious of your work!I love how you can get in their heads,and how Peter went from wanting something,(a guy who will stay around after sex)to figuring out what to do after he got it!
Much as I like seeing good examples of working in heads(since there are so many cheesy,unrealistic examples out there)to work that in myself for my own stories,I would need time to calm down from life and slowly piece it together.(much of my writing is written in pieces that only fit together when finished)
haven't had much free time lately,and to get more of what I want finished,I'll have to get up front and solid with some of my stressers.....meanwhile,your work continues to inspire!

game_byrd December 14 2012, 00:59:47 UTC

Hey! I know you've got a lot going on in your life, so I'm glad to see you around and I hope the good reading material helps.

DD3 writes her stuff in pieces and puts it together section by section like that. I can't wrap my mind around how that works for a person. I write very linearly, even if I'm writing a mixed-timeline fic. But hey - her work is lovely, so obviously it works.

Thanks so much!