Comments | game_byrd: Sexual Tension Chapter 12: Cleansing the Palate

game_byrd

Sexual Tension Chapter 12: Cleansing the Palate

Dec 11, 2012 22:01

Title: Cleansing the Palate
Characters: Sylar, Peter
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Word count: 1,400
Setting: The Wall, Sexual Tension AU
Summary:Peter and Sylar wind down immediately following ' Sexual Tension, Resolved' (masterlist found here). Written for the 2012 Advent Calendar.

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sylar, advent calendar, !fandom: heroes, peter, sexual tension, rated nc-17

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game_byrd December 12 2012, 13:15:03 UTC

I had no idea there would be more either and I'm kind of embarrassed about it. I urged means2bhuman to wrap up Sexual Tension, end it, and get it off our plates so we could go on to other writing projects. She did, and almost immediately my stupid brain became obsessed with the 'what happens next' thing it does with stories.

I have four more chapters of smuttiness that I'll post over the Advent as filler and my own entry.

I'm glad you liked it!

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game_byrd December 13 2012, 03:57:47 UTC

You're welcome!

mafalda_yu December 12 2012, 16:58:57 UTC

Probably (obviously!) I should have read first "Sexual Tension" (another fic to add to my list: "to read urgently!") anyway this is really a sweet piece.
I love the choice of words you used to explain the thoughts (and the beginning of change) of the feelings of Peter
<.. mortally wounded the image of him as a monster> very incisive just perfect!

game_byrd December 12 2012, 22:52:22 UTC

Sexual Tension has some warnings at the beginning which, as others have mentioned, aren't very accurate for what's actually in it. I'm sure means2bhuman and I would love for you to read it! Urgently!

Thank you for the compliments!

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game_byrd December 12 2012, 22:47:49 UTC

Yeah, the warnings were maybe over-warning for what was actually in the fic. I'm really glad you gave it another shot!

dancingdragon3 December 12 2012, 18:14:33 UTC

Very sweet! I liked it a lot. Especially Sylar's thoughts about Peter being easy to clean and take care of! LOL! Hilarious. But also true. Peter strikes me as being low maintaintence, while Sylar on the other hand...

Can't wait for the next parts.

game_byrd December 12 2012, 22:46:26 UTC

Yay! I'll post more tonight.

I agree that ... if you took Peter as he is and didn't demand much of him, then he would be very giving, reasonable, low drama, and low maintenance. If you took Sylar as he was, I think he'd leave you. Really. I don't think he likes who he is and anyone who *does* like him as he is is suspect and not looking out for his best interests (see Elle). I think he wants someone who will help him change, go on a journey with him, help him unpack his baggage and get over his issues. In that, I think he'd be pretty hard to deal with in a relationship.