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Bricks in the Wall, Chapter 34: The Metaphorical Hammer

Nov 24, 2012 11:48

Title: The Metaphorical Hammer
Characters: Peter, Sylar
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Word count: 1,800
Setting: The Wall
Summary: Peter starts off wanting nothing to do with Sylar; ends wanting to do nothing without him. Or, alternately, it's the story of how Sylar worms his way into Peter's life, bed, and heart.
Notes: Inspired by one ( Read more... )

bricks, sylar, !fandom: heroes, peter, rated nc-17

Comments 8

dancingdragon3 November 25 2012, 01:15:59 UTC

Woot! Another Brick! Love these!

Love it! Sylar following Peter around, trying so hard to get some attention. But the best was the the wall of pillows. That is so cute. As was Sylar defiantly throwing them away. That was so great! Poor wanting to cuddle Peter. This was wonderful. I so love all your Bricks in the Wall. They are all such gems.

game_byrd November 25 2012, 01:32:07 UTC

Yay! You don't know how much I've been wanting an ego-stroke today. Which is silly of me, but there it is.

Glad you liked it! This was another of those scenarios that came to me upon waking.

means2bhuman November 25 2012, 06:10:46 UTC

Aww. I was wondering 'which line?' before I read it and I was surprised which one it was ( ... )

game_byrd November 29 2012, 02:02:22 UTC

Yeah, Sylar's pretty scary-looking without even trying much. But he emotes really well - from tiny and inoffensive to death-on-wheels.

This whole story is a 'foot in the door' thing! Sylar really worms his way in, one bit at a time. I hadn't made up my mind if he did it intentionally or if it was just a natural progression. It's the difference between him thinking 'Peter let me sleep in his bed last night, so I can sleep there again tonight!' and 'Peter let me sleep in his bed last night, so there's no way I'm going to sleep anywhere else' along with whatever other entitlement he might want to add.

Your line was just so raw! So bone-deep in the human psyche! I had to run with it.

Of course its *Peter* who starts the cuddling. Thing is, I don't think he even means to. Obviously he's not there yet mentally and he doesn't want to, but I think its so unconscious for him he just sees an available body and latches on.That's it exactly. He doesn't mean to, but he does it anyway. It's like someone on a diet, trying to be good, but then one ( ... )

means2bhuman November 25 2012, 06:10:57 UTC

Wow, Petey. Letting the guy move in but you're not sexing him? That's...really...interesting ( ... )

game_byrd November 29 2012, 02:07:47 UTC

Wow, Petey. Letting the guy move in but you're not sexing him? That's...really...interesting.

That takes serious amounts of willpower from Peter, you know.

Sylar ripping off the renewed pillow wall was fantastic. I like him sticking up for himself...subtly. And Peter just blinks at the rather calm yet brazen display and goes "...okay." and lays down.

I haven't seen Guess Who, but yeah. I think at this point, Sylar has just had enough with Peter's idiocy with the god-damn pillow wall and denying himself to no point. Because yeah, Sylar knows Peter wouldn't need the pillow wall if he didn't want what was on the other side so bad. You're totally right that Sylar was like "Fucking Christ! It took him like a hundred times longer to get to this point than it took me to bash someone's brains out!"

Aaaand Pete's Diner will never be the same in my mind again.

There's a certain chapter in SS that features sex in a diner, too. In a dream, but nonetheless.

Peter picks up a pillow. Sylar raises an eyebrow, "That had better be going under ( ... )

cheetobuzz December 4 2012, 22:27:12 UTC

hehe in my hectic runs and chores,I keep needing to come back to this story in extreme chances of getting a few minutes of free time the past few days.Very well done,and at times,events slowly happening can be the best to get lost in.

game_byrd December 5 2012, 02:43:56 UTC

Thank you! Glad you liked it!