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Bricks in the Wall, Chapter 31: User Friendly, Friendly Use

Sep 10, 2012 21:01

Title: User Friendly, Friendly Use
Characters: Sylar, Peter
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Allusions to coerced sex
Word count: 2,700
Setting: The Wall
Summary: Dual-POV. Sylar never imagined anyone could fall in love with him. / Peter never imagined he could fall in love with Sylar.

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bricks, sylar, !fandom: heroes, peter, rated nc-17

Comments 9

cheetobuzz September 11 2012, 16:54:08 UTC

woohoo!good story,and good comeback to the type of chemistry and interaction some of us might have gotten hooked on.Tense and hesitant in just the right spots,without overdoing any of it.Just the right mix!:)

game_byrd September 12 2012, 02:00:04 UTC

Thank you so much!

means2bhuman September 12 2012, 01:43:21 UTC

OMG. I'm eating this up. So angsty and wonderful. I LOVE it!!

With this on my mind, hearing Maroon 5's "One More Night" reminded me of User Friendly http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BpypkvZjJiI

game_byrd September 12 2012, 02:00:39 UTC

Thank you! So glad you like it. I'll check out the vid later. Been busy this evening.

game_byrd September 12 2012, 02:43:07 UTC

It's a good song. Thanks for the link!

dancingdragon3 September 12 2012, 02:18:48 UTC

I love this. And I really like it when you show us both points of view. This is so complex in how differently each man sees the situation. You are very skilled at showing cross purposes and how vastly differently the same situation can be construed. I don't know which one I should feel more sorry for, Sylar for assuming Peter is using him, or Peter for not understanding how Sylar feels and then at the end thinking how in sync they are, when they aren't really. Getting there, though.

Great fic!

game_byrd September 12 2012, 02:26:53 UTC

Peter's all starry-eyed romantic and Sylar's ... well, not. But at least there at the end, Sylar has figured out that Peter has actually fallen for him. And Peter ... well, he means well. It's not at his empathic best in this story, but he's trying a lot harder than usual. Sylar did sort of trap him into the situation.

lornrocks September 15 2012, 17:07:19 UTC

I really do love your two point-of-views stories, as I've said before, and I like how the more you read, the more is revealed about the whole picture from both.

This is a good culmination of what all the other stories have been leading up to, it'll be great to see what happens after this.

game_byrd September 15 2012, 17:11:27 UTC

Yeah, this started out as merely Sylar's POV, then I thought of how you'd recently said you liked seeing it from the other POV, too. It's most likely a stand alone, but the 'what comes next' would be interesting, for sure. As DD3 points out, even at the end of the story, both men are operating under a lot of misconceptions about what's going on in the other's head.

Thank you for the comment!