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Gabriel the Creeper

Aug 16, 2012 22:50

Title: Gabriel the Creeper
Characters: Gabriel, Noah Bennet, Tracy Strauss
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Light bondage, voyuerism, implied humiliation, ice play
Word Count: 1200
Summary: Immediately after Brave New World, Gabriel gives himself a mission. He ends up walking into a situation where he sees more of Noah than he ever wanted to.
Notes: Written for ( Read more... )

gabriel, noah bennet, !fandom: heroes, tracy strauss, rated nc-17

Comments 7

black_sluggard August 17 2012, 04:16:52 UTC

I think you must have at some point, because because I'm pretty sure I read this. It's not the sort of thing you forget. XD

game_byrd August 17 2012, 11:30:00 UTC

I'm thinking you must have read it on the kinkmeme thread, because I just went and looked again and I can't find it in my journal. I have some other kinkmeme ones I'll be posting this weekend. Actually, I have a bunch of stuff to post this weekend. Hopefully after writing this weekend, I'll have even more!

dancingdragon3 August 17 2012, 15:55:01 UTC

Ahahaha! Oh I love this. I didn't recognise it until we got to Tracy, but I have def read it before and am so happy to read it again. And as usual, I want to know how Peter reacts to finding out about Sylar's crush, because I am obssessed with every single version of Petlar you write.

HUGS

game_byrd October 31 2012, 02:50:56 UTC

Oh hey, I never replied to this! Thank you for the comment! Now that I reread the fic, I must admit that I, too, am curious about what happens next - the crush with Peter, the looking for a way to prove himself, the inevitable taunting of Noah - all unresolved. Hm.

HUGS back!

digitalada October 31 2012, 02:38:26 UTC

Wow. I don't ship it, but damn this was really funny. I do think that if Noah/Tracy happened there would be some freaky stuff going on.

I liked Tracy inviting Sylar to join the party and him being too weirded out/afraid to do it and leaving. I bet that he's not going to try to kill Noah anymore since he's good now, but I bet he's going to bring up the thing with Tracy at the most inappropriate times.

I also liked Sylar having a cute little crush on Peter too. Aww.

game_byrd October 31 2012, 02:52:37 UTC

Hey, thanks!

Noah/Tracy aren't my usual ship either but I just can't wrap my head around Lauren in any fashion.

Thanks so much for the comment. Glad you're enjoying!

digitalada November 1 2012, 05:44:20 UTC

Yeah, I think Lauren is okay but I'm not big on the whole HRG/Lauren thing. To be honest, I felt like they just gave Noah a love interest because Sandra had a love interest. So, I don't hate it, but I don't love it. I did like Sandra and Noah together, but at the same time, I understand why it eventually feel apart. Even after all the company stuff was revealed, Noah still kept a ton of secrets from Sandra and a relationship can't really last long with that many lies.

I was happy that they were still on good terms afterwards though and were able to have Thanksgiving together. It's sort of like many parents' relationship, minus the superpowers and secret agent stuff. There were also some deleted scenes where Sandra meets Tracy and looks after Noah after Edgar stabs him on the season four DVDs.

I think I could imagine Noah/Tracy a little bit more than Noah/Lauren though. Mainly because Tracy likes older dudes. And like I said, your fic is funny. I clicked on it out of morbid curiosity but ended up liking it a lot.