Comments | game_byrd: Bricks in the Wall, Chapter 22: Playing Hard to Get

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Bricks in the Wall, Chapter 22: Playing Hard to Get

May 20, 2012 18:02

Title: Playing Hard to Get
Characters: Sylar, Peter
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Words: 2,700
Setting: The Wall
Summary: PWP. Sylar's upset that no one is willing to put up with someone as screwed in the head as he is. Peter proves him wrong. Beta by means2bhuman. I used this as guidance for some of Sylar's emotional reactions. Many ( Read more... )

bricks, sylar, !fandom: heroes, peter, rated nc-17

Comments 11

lornrocks May 29 2012, 08:14:54 UTC

I was a bit worried that Peter wasn't on board with it, but I'm glad it was consensual, you know?

(I'm not sure Sylar could do something like that, despite the violence he caused, at least at this point in the series.)

game_byrd May 29 2012, 11:15:15 UTC

You're not sure Sylar could bring himself to force himself on someone, given his mentality in the Wall? Or you're not sure Sylar could be violent/this physically active in/during sex at this point in the series?

Not that I disagree with either - personally I have a hard time wrapping my mind around the very idea of hate!sex, or violence + sex. Some of these stories are me trying on ideas for size, like a new coat, trying to see how it fits.

Thanks for the review!

lornrocks June 2 2012, 20:39:02 UTC

I'm not sure, I guess I meant I don't know if he would have been that sort of violence towards anyone in the nightmare, he seemed pretty resigned to just mope when Peter got there, he really wanted to be different if it meant getting someone to be around him, you know?

game_byrd June 2 2012, 20:40:37 UTC

Yes, that makes sense, too.

Damn the Heroes writers for condensing five years into 15 minutes!

means2bhuman June 5 2012, 09:29:22 UTC

I am so behind, I've been abandoning you! My schedule is going to be insane from now until August ( ... )

game_byrd June 5 2012, 11:33:01 UTC

I don't have a lot of time, so I'll just respond to the opthamologist things -

Gabriel Gray wore glasses, so I assume he went to an eye doctor at some point. It's possible he just bought the generic 'reading glasses' you can get at a drug store without a prescription, since his eyesight obviously isn't very bad (Sylar gets along just fine without glasses, for example, and even Gabriel takes them off for different things).

Unless I got the wrong doctor name/label?

Thank you so much for all the other comments!

game_byrd June 5 2012, 12:20:54 UTC

Did Sylar ever get a hug in canon? I can't think of any ...

means2bhuman June 6 2012, 00:20:37 UTC

Samuel and Virginia off the top of my head. The 5YG Petlar hug doesn't really count.

means2bhuman June 5 2012, 09:29:33 UTC

I put no special importance on the forehead kiss at first...until I remembered that Sylar cuts into foreheads (kinda easy to forget when you're writing powerless behind-the-Wall stuff). That's so extra sick and cool and (to Sylar) sexy, its fantastic. Plus, its a backwards way of Sylar being 'sweet' and 'tender ( ... )

dancingdragon3 September 4 2012, 06:10:41 UTC

Oh my god! How did I miss this! This is incredible!! I have to go read it again...

game_byrd September 4 2012, 11:21:45 UTC

Woo-hoo! Glad you found it, at least!