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Bricks in the Wall, Chapter 21: Sweet Surrender

May 18, 2012 19:42

Title: Sweet Surrender
Characters: Sylar, Peter
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Words: 1,600
Setting: The Wall
Summary: PWP. Sylar and Peter, in the Wall, have been making out and getting one another off. Peter finally gets fed up with Sylar's overbearing behavior and does something about it. Sylar finds that far more enjoyable than he ( Read more... )

bricks, sylar, !fandom: heroes, peter, rated nc-17

Comments 6

means2bhuman May 19 2012, 02:44:47 UTC

. . . BUNK.

game_byrd May 19 2012, 02:47:14 UTC

SCORE!

lornrocks May 29 2012, 07:33:20 UTC

Mhmm, that's right Sylar bb. Give in to Peter's charms!

game_byrd May 29 2012, 11:21:53 UTC

Haha! This was inspired by a friend observing how differently Peter and Sylar kissed. Sylar has this 'I'm going to eat your face with my kisses, mah!' thing going on, and Peter's more 'kiss, change position, kiss, move head, kiss, tilt and approach differently, kiss, rub noses, kiss, nuzzle, kiss, change position'. He goes for variety and constant change. I was thinking 'what would Peter do when presented with someone who wanted to aggressively suck on his face, rather than let Peter deliver the string of separate kisses that he likes to do?'

dancingdragon3 September 4 2012, 06:00:19 UTC

Oh Squee! A completely new to me bit of smut. Excellent! I always love how you describe the differences in how Peter and Sylar kiss. That was a big thing in Handle With Care I liked. But this, being inside Sylar's head as he willingly gives up control and gets turned on by it is wonderful! Very smexy!

game_byrd September 4 2012, 11:33:22 UTC

Yay! Yeah, they do kiss very differently. I think it's meanie who calls it Sylar's face-eating kiss. He's got a big mouth, he opens it wide, and just envelopes the other person's mouth. Personally, I think I'd find that a bit intimidating and gross. He doesn't do it that way all the time, but often.

Peter's kiss-pattern is much more iterative: kiss-break, kiss-break, kiss-break. Usually with nuzzling or light pecks in between. He doesn't pull away more than half an inch, but he doesn't keep the same kiss going on for very long like Sylar does.

In this story, I was thinking Peter would eventually get tired of Sylar's style and call a time-out to do things Peter's way for once.