Comments | game_byrd: Bricks in the Wall, Chapter 16: The House of the Second Chance

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Bricks in the Wall, Chapter 16: The House of the Second Chance

Apr 11, 2012 16:23

Title: The House of the Second Chance
Genre: Song lyrics (based on The House of the Rising Sun, but I like this one by Muse for Sylar, as far as tone goes)
Characters: Sylar, Peter
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Words: 150
Setting: The Wall

( Silliness. )

bricks, sylar, !fandom: heroes, peter, rated pg

Comments 4

dancingdragon3 April 12 2012, 07:56:29 UTC

OMG!! This is fabulous!! A poem/song! What a cool idea. I love it.

Now the only thing this killer has
Is heartache and regret
And all the powers that I have gained
Have not seen my needs met

Perfect!

game_byrd April 12 2012, 16:27:36 UTC

Thanks! First time I've ever done song lyrics. It occurred to me as an idea the day before I got laid off. I printed it half finished and stuck it in my pocket, then forgot about it until a couple days ago.

Ooh la la... means2bhuman April 14 2012, 04:46:23 UTC

Welcome to the song-fic club! Woo hoo!

I *loved* this, wow, so much coolness. Like, shivery cool. Its like watching the next five minutes of Heroes S5 or something.

My favorites were the fourth and last verses. Something about working in how Peter was from New York, too, was...awesome. Beginning and ending sentences being sort of the same, but the meaning the journey was totally different.

I tried to listen to the song....didn't like that. Tried to listen to the song while I read...didn't work. Something about that beat was, like, I couldn't grasp it. I liked putting my own beat or whatever to it in my head (which is fine, I hope) and that was like "yeah!!"

My next song fic is going to be about a nightmare or about a tan ( I have them planned! How awesome is that?)

Re: Ooh la la... game_byrd April 14 2012, 13:48:14 UTC

Yay! Thanks. I'm looking forward to yours, if you'll share it.