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lornrocks January 30 2012, 09:29:22 UTC
Why do I have a sense of deja vu in reading this? Did I read this before for you? (I literally cannot remember.)

In any case, I love this verse and can't wait to see more.

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game_byrd January 30 2012, 12:27:21 UTC
Most of this chapter was posted before. I believe the first time around ended with "Oh, it is on. It is so on". And there was no part at first where Sylar was reflecting on what it meant - it just started right out with him trying to read and Peter bonking him with ping pong balls.

So yeah, you've probably read that part before, back in August. But now it fits into context of the larger story!

All of the chapters to come are new.

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lornrocks January 30 2012, 15:24:40 UTC
Ah, okay, no wonder I was confused, haha.

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asmodesgold February 3 2012, 06:31:26 UTC
Just caught up on the series and I'm still intrigued! Your emotional problems always seem so much more complicated than mine-I guess because I tend to focus on how the outside world/events effects what the characters do instead of vice versa...if that makes sense.

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game_byrd February 3 2012, 11:58:12 UTC
I just realized last night - rather late - that I'd failed to update this since Sunday! I'll post more today!

This was a more emotionally complex story than usual for me. Both characters have some pretty big internal hurdles to get over. Thanks for the kind words!

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asmodesgold February 3 2012, 16:38:23 UTC
Oops...I guess it didn't reply to your comment....

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game_byrd February 3 2012, 16:42:38 UTC
That's fine. The other two chapters are up now!

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asmodesgold February 3 2012, 16:37:53 UTC
Yay! I'm excited to see how they jump those hurdles! :D

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dancingdragon3 February 7 2012, 02:56:16 UTC
God I so love Peter hitting Sylar with the ping pong balls. That is the best thing ever!

I am quickly re-reading this story from the first kiss and oh man is it so heart-wrenching. Peter was so into Sylar the day on the piano bench. Just so into the whole idea of being naughty with him and then the fight and the hiding and being so depressed. I am glad to be at the part where Sylar starts to get a clue and things get better. But I wonder will they ever be as wonderful and innocent as that day with the piano? Even if they get together, could they ever forget this period of darkness? Will Peter ever be able to get over it?

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game_byrd February 7 2012, 03:01:04 UTC
I think one of Peter's greatest strengths is getting over things.

But that's a good question!

And you remind me that I need to post that other chapter of Wall Verse tonight.

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dancingdragon3 February 7 2012, 03:25:05 UTC
Oh yes, please post it!

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