Wall Verse Chapter 11, Parting Is Such Sweet Sorrow

[game_byrd]

Title: Parting Is Such Sweet Sorrow
Characters: Peter/Sylar
Rating: R
Warnings: Violence
Word count: ~1,600
Setting: The Wall, part of the series Wall Verse Shorts
Summary: After their first time together sexually, Sylar reacts badly.

Comments

[punk4life1315]

SYLAR, YOU ARE BEING A BIG STUPID JERK!

[game_byrd]

He is, isn't he? :D

Thanks for commenting!

[vivihanna]

This is so sad. Doesn't Sylar know it's perfectly normal for you not to be able to think while Peter is kissing you! Even if it was a trap/trick, what a wonderful trap it would be. <3

Thank you for sharing, I can't wait to see what happens next! :D

[game_byrd]

Thank you! Glad you're enjoying it.

And yes, there are times when thinking is way, way over-rated. When Peter is kissing a person is probably one of those times.

[game_byrd]

Sylar's in hell. He has a lot of emotional healing and growing up to do!

Thanks for the comment. I'm glad you're enjoying it.

[kemokage]

This was awesome! I kept wondering what Sylar was thinking in the parts that were from Peter's pov and this definitely didn't disappoint. Poor Sylar, he's certainly had some messed up relationships and being raised by Virginia didn't help anything either.

[game_byrd]

Yeah, you're playing with fire with Sylar, or trying to handle a wild animal. Maybe Peter can help him grow past that?

Glad you liked it!

[lornrocks]

I believe the first comment here sums up my feelings, ha ha.

Although I do understand why Sylar is so hesitant, I get that he has some scars and issues, but he should really stop giving Peter mixed signals.

Or maybe they should, I dunno, talk about it. But that'll probably never happen because they actually are two pretty private guys. Huh.

ANYWAY. Can't wait to see more, as always.

[game_byrd]

What?!? Talking?!? What is this bizarre thing you speak of?

LOL.

And Sylar, being a big jerk? Yeah, there's sort of a lot of canon precedent for that, isn't there?

There will be talking at some point in this fic. But not for a little while.

[lornrocks]

That's understandable. Peter needs to give Sylar some space and Sylar will hopefully have his time to stew.

(I said as if they were real people. Sigh.)

[game_byrd]

(I said as if they were real people. Sigh.)

It's easier that way, really. Otherwise we're talking about semi-archetypal mental representations and their adherence to canon characterization. Easier to just say "Peter" and "Sylar".