Comments | galmaegi: [block b] nostalgia

galmaegi

[block b] nostalgia

Jul 20, 2012 13:10

nostalgia
block b, b-bomb, u-kwon
pg (drug use), 499w
prompt: "if your 8 year old self met you, would they be proud?" (aupairs challenge #1)

( They're on the roof of the engineering building, because Yukwon has a friend with a security pass and Minhyuk has pot and neither of them want to attend that afternoon's lecture. )

* u-kwon, # block b, * b-bomb

Comments 6

remplissant August 1 2012, 20:16:51 UTC

Oh, my! I am so happy to have stumbled upon this fic :) I loved your usage of the prompt, and I really like the interactions between Minhyuk and Yukwon. I don't think you've characterized either boy poorly because your Minhyuk gives off that kind of lazy/carefree mysterious persona that is similar to the Minhyuk on television; your Yukwon is very endearing, wondering about his 8 year old self and feeling as though he may have let his younger self down in a way.

Overall this was a really great fic-attitude and atmosphere and no one ever writes genfic so that was also such a pleasant surprise :) Great job and I hope you will consider writing for this fandom again :)

have you cross posted this to the block b fix comm by any chance?

galmaegi August 2 2012, 01:38:15 UTC

this was such an encouraging comment to receive, thank you ;~; i've read quite a few block b fics but somehow making the transition to writing one was difficult, maybe because it's not one of my main fandoms. but i enjoyed writing yukwon a lot (as you can probably tell), so i'd like to write more soon.

and i didn't, but i will!

lycheu August 5 2012, 03:15:12 UTC

OMG you wrote another drug fic but I didn't read it until now ._.

Anyways, I'd say the characterization isn't bad at all; it's pretty believable so I wouldn't worry about it c:

I'll be looking forward to your other possible Block B fics though~ I think I've been stuck reading too much exo these days, haha :>

galmaegi August 7 2012, 02:07:39 UTC

there's just so much exo compared to everything else! thanks for reading ^^ i like block b a lot, and their fics are always so much fun to read. i just have to learn them a bit better.

maudlinsky August 12 2012, 01:17:14 UTC

This is so awesome! I love the dynamics between Minhyuk and Yukwon in this. And I love fics where boys are just being boys (skipping school, getting high, the usual). So great job there! And the dialogue was so good. It didn't feel rehearsed or forced; it was like something a friend would say.

I really liked the setting in this, and even though it is short, I can still picture it. I think that this was a refreshing use of the prompt, and I congratulate you on trying a new fandom. I hope you stick around in this one! ^_^

Thanks for writing this. It's made me smile. ♥

galmaegi August 13 2012, 14:43:28 UTC

ah thank you for your comment! i'm glad i could make you smile ^^ these two are so cute together, idek.