Comments | galmaegi: [exo] pass the dutch

galmaegi

[exo] pass the dutch

Jun 13, 2012 04:24

pass the dutch
exo, suho/sehun, mention of suho/yunho
pg (drug use), 2182w
joonmyun tries drugs and tries not to stare at the delivery boy.

( His long, narrow eyes look sleepy, but Joonmyun can't tell if that's becuse he's already sampled Hyukjae's wares or if that's just the way he looks. )

* sehun, # exo, * suho

Comments 7

vipjuly July 4 2012, 09:52:16 UTC

Surprisingly short, but good. I'd love some sort of sequel, but it's also good like this. Your characterization of Sehun makes it easy to relate (that is, for someone who's partook in such things haha). All in all: great. :)

galmaegi July 7 2012, 03:17:45 UTC

yeah, i definitely want to do more with this kind of setting. i just have such a weakness for college/bro exo ;_; thanks for commenting!

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galmaegi July 7 2012, 03:17:51 UTC

thanks :D

baekhyun July 5 2012, 02:06:54 UTC

this is really good!
i liked your characterization. it felt like i could see this happening XD

galmaegi July 7 2012, 03:18:56 UTC

hehe thank you! i'm still trying to figure exo out, so i'm glad it seemed possible.

lycheu July 12 2012, 21:24:26 UTC

I like this. It's got good flow and I didn't realize that it was short til it was over. :c (That's how awesome it was!! hehe) Thanks for sharing~ (:

galmaegi July 14 2012, 00:48:00 UTC

haha, in my head it's long because it was supposed to be a drabble...it's still pretty short though. thanks for commenting!