[infinite] smart bomb (3/7)

[galmaegi]

smart bomb
infinite, hoya/sungyeol
pg-13; ongoing
ao3 mirror

all dressed up (august 2008)

Comments

[mangafanxd]

/reaches out for you/

this...is so...i love it omg.the broship is hitting me so hard and i just--i'm a sucker for growing up fics/stories??

as always, love your style and portrayals~ hoya and sungyeol adorable best friends ;u; precious things

he’s satisfied with what he has. conflicted because i want to see where this story goes from here but it's really good as is and do i want them to be separated-----dilemmas lol.

\o/

[galmaegi]

thank you! i really love growing up/coming of age stories too (if you can't already tell...). they can't be separated, they still have another half of the school year to go!

[penny_lane_42]

This was full of such nice details and summery descriptions. I really love how you capture moments in time between these two.

[galmaegi]

thank you very much! it's weird writing about summer when it's winter here, makes me wistful.

[gangetic]

i really like your Hoya in this series: his flippant and disinterested friendliness, and the strange, tentative bond that creates between him and Yeol.

“What are you gonna do if she needs toilet paper?” Hoya murmurs.

i snorted.

i'm so so so curious as to what's going to happen to them ; o; the tension is killing me, KILLING ME I SAY! /shakes you violently!!!!

[galmaegi]

is violently shaken （。□°） thank you! tbh i'm never sure about how to sustain tension, so i'm glad it works here. (and hoya, too!)

[misplacebaggage]

“Yeah, and I look great in a little frilly apron,” says Sungyeol. Hoya snorts. “So you won’t let me be a bum, but you’ll let me be a housewife? What kind of friend are you?”

oh my god i love how sungyeol jumps immediately to the title of housewife after hoya offers to room together

“I can’t leave,” says Hoya. “What would you do without me?”

“I’d have a better life,” Sungyeol replies, flapping his hand at the table until the wrapper falls away from his fingers. But for a moment, with his hair soft and heavy from the pool and Hoya’s feet up on the chair across from him and vanilla ice cream cold and tasteless on his tongue, he’s satisfied with what he has.

;~~~; i love thisssss

[galmaegi]

guess where i'm washing~
thank you for reading! i'm glad you liked it, and those parts in specific. please anticipate the next part, sometime this century...

[seutahking]

ahhh i've been itching to read hoya/sungyeol so badly bc lol they don't exist irl, and i love the way you write them as just loser high school boys and the way they interact and everything and the white foam on the wrapper and kasjfhakjh

[galmaegi]

thank you! i'm glad this could help scratch your itch. it may not exist irl but that's what fiction is for :')