[infinite] smart bomb (2/7)

[galmaegi]

smart bomb
infinite, hoya/sungyeol
pg-13; ongoing
ao3 mirror

french inhale (june 2008)

Comments

[mangafanxd]

UGH I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS

WAIT

SPOT

[penny_lane_42]

Oh, this fic! I'm glad to see more of it! And omg they are such boys, aren't they? It cracks me up. And so does their discomfort. Oh, boys.

[galmaegi]

they really are, and it's been fun writing them as silly teenage boys, heh. thanks for reading! lots more awkward times ahead, hopefully.

[gangetic]

He’s going cross-eyed from Hoya’s face being so close, and when he looks up his eyes meet Hoya’s and there’s a moment when neither of them move.

omfg. did you add this line, or did i just not notice it the last time i read this? i'm gonna die. i love all the little details like that that you sprinkled about--it makes the whole thing so visceral and easy to imagine.

ARE THEY GONNA FUCK??? PLEASE TELL ME THEY FUCK

[galmaegi]

IT SAYS PG-13 RIGHT THERE MAN IDK WHAT YOU WANT FROM ME. but uh. perhaps ~_~ and thank you! that line was there before, hehe.

[galmaegi]

they make great foils for each other and they really do deserve more fic. thank you for reading, pls stay tuned :D

[damnablebell]

i love this fic so much! you write them in a way that feels very true to what teenage boys are actually like. it doesn't at all feel exaggerated. the imagery here is also vivid without relying on overly heavy prose ikywim. so nice.

[galmaegi]

ah, thank you very much for this comment :) i know what you mean! i've been trying to justify writing a high school au with realism, so i'm glad it's working.