I made at first for her fic 2 versions before I read the full story at
hawaii_bigbang.
After this, we talk about a lot, she suggested some changes because of the fic and the story and the result is:
And finally I read her story and there was some tears involved and I loved her story a lot. Please read and comment at her fic if you love it too :)
Greater Than the Sum of Its Parts by mcparrot