So, remember a few days ago when one of my convictions about the trailer was that rockin' afro kid was Ray's kid? Well, I sort of wrote it
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Ohhhhh! So interesting! I had never thought about other people being in this verse, but clearly there should be. I like the little community you created there.
How did they create something in two minutes that's so rich and lets us fill it with so much??
thanks for commenting. it just didn't sit with me, having the four boys be the only ones in the entire world that are rebelling. i like to imagine that there are larger resistance groups, who are being taken out by the Draculoids in vast sweeps. but that could just be my harry potter influence coming in, with the Order vs the DEs.
i just read "ray" and "daughter" and was like - read read read.
this was...wow. i think i might have to go cry a little in silence right now. this was absolutely beautiful. sad but hopeful and just all around perfect!
is it bad of me that i was hoping this would be a little soul crushing? like, i just love the imagery of a happy occasion being broken into with pain and death, and realising that no, you really can never stop fighting, as much as you might want to, it's just not an option. but if you have other people to fight with, or if you believe in what you're fighting for, that makes it a little better.
no not at all. i kind of like writing soul crushing things better than happy things. you definitely managed to make this the best kind of bitter-sweet :)
I love this, because of course there should be more than just them in the world. Love that they always leave their symbols behind too, and still hope that one day they will meet back up.
well, i was looking at my gsf table, wishing i'd never claimed it, because it's allll romantic shit, and most of it seems pretty and i can't really handle romance, and then i was looking again in despair, and i was like HOMG. BABY SHOWER. RAY MAY OR MAY NOT HAVE A CHILD!!! and once i said that, i needed woman to produce said babies, and if christa was going to be there, than lynz and alicia and jamia had to be there, and if they were there then bob had to be there! except if they were, why were they not in the trailer? (except then i killed off jamia to make frank more bitter) yeah, basically everything i write boils down to how can i fit this into one of my 5 bingo tables.
they will find them! once they meet dr death defying, they get him to say coded messages, so just in case the three of them are listening in, they'll get them. and gerard tells carmen bedtime stories of alicia and lynz and bob and how awesome they were, and carmen thinks they're made up prince and princesses, but one day she'll know and and and. yeah, this verse
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How did they create something in two minutes that's so rich and lets us fill it with so much??
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It makes perfect sense to him that every major event should end in a cuddle.
Yessssss.
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this was...wow. i think i might have to go cry a little in silence right now. this was absolutely beautiful. sad but hopeful and just all around perfect!
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(PS: http://twitter.com/copista5 is Christa's Twitter, so. I'd say that's more concrete evidence than Google rumors. ;) )
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ray looooooves his daughter, who's his even if she isn't his. <3 plus, now she gets to have four daddies! <3
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they will find them! once they meet dr death defying, they get him to say coded messages, so just in case the three of them are listening in, they'll get them. and gerard tells carmen bedtime stories of alicia and lynz and bob and how awesome they were, and carmen thinks they're made up prince and princesses, but one day she'll know and and and. yeah, this verse ( ... )
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