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Aug 12, 2012 18:38

Title: End of Eternity: Beginning
Rating: G
Pairing: Gai & Kakashi, pretty Gen actually
Timeline: post fourth war, far future
Notes: written, as usual for naruto_meme, but I am going to quit that place soon, I swear.
Warning: Angst, mention of major character death
Summary: Gai's youth is over.

Depressing fic under the cut )

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hokuton_punch August 13 2012, 01:39:09 UTC
Ahhhhhh, this is beautiful but so sad. ;o; Excellent work.

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thisl0ser August 13 2012, 12:14:15 UTC
Thank you!

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sydney_an_leon August 13 2012, 02:32:33 UTC
Ah, this was you?! Awesome! I read it over at the Meme, and thought it was bold, beautiful and so heartrendingly angsty! I loved it so much.

I made a request myself, and there's one or two I might even fill, but I've just been lazy to getting around to actually doing it.

Also, I just have to say, I love your work so much! All the stories I've read of yours have always been wonderful, enjoyable and just so insightful and deep with emotion. <3 Please keep writing, for both yourself and the fandom fans! XD Tehe!

(And yeah.... I could totally see Kakashi and Gai going out in a blazy of glory battle royal together.)

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thisl0ser August 13 2012, 12:22:27 UTC
Thank you! (Is it extremely sad that most Kakashi/Gai fills over at the meme were written by me?)

Hm, I might be filling another prompt soon, but I'm not sure yet. That one won't be Kakashi/Gai, though, and it might actually turn out too weird and vague to post, so...

Oh, you reminded me that I haven't actually left a prompt this meme!

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sydney_an_leon August 14 2012, 00:40:40 UTC
To post again, this time I saw your notes -

I would have never guessed that English wasn't your first language! So I wouldn't doubt your language skills; it just proves how well you know it! :3

Also, I did notice the pause of the story, so I did think that first part was the end of it. About three days later, I noticed it had more posts, and I was rather excited by it. I felt that had you left it were it was, that would have been a fitting ending; but I think I enjoy the extension more - as like I said above, I can't see these two just *waiting* for the end.... they'd rather chase it down, and do it together. XD Little morbid sounding, but that's kinda how I see it.

As far as what to do next... well... I could give you a request if you're accepting them. It'd be Naruto-verse, as that's what I'm into right now, and I love the way you write these characters. Though... it would be a challenge because it'd be rather cracky; fair warning. XD

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thisl0ser August 14 2012, 04:32:15 UTC
I would have never guessed that English wasn't your first language! So I wouldn't doubt your language skills; it just proves how well you know it!

Thanks! I always think it's pretty obvious. Writing in a second language can be really frustrating... It's very constraining sometimes. I often wonder if I shouldn't try writing everything in German first and then translate the whole thing because I've never done that before, but it would be twice as much work., and I wouldn't even want to translate any of my existing fics into German. There'd be no point either, since pretty much every German can understand English.

As far as what to do next... well... I could give you a request if you're accepting them. It'd be Naruto-verse, as that's what I'm into right now, and I love the way you write these characters. Though... it would be a challenge because it'd be rather cracky; fair warning. Sorry, I don't take requests - because I really suck at filling them... and I can't do cracky at all (tried it once, was not a success). I have a lot of old ( ... )

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tj_dragonblade August 13 2012, 07:42:59 UTC
This fic is the kind of good that leaves me with a lump in my throat and no words. Thanks so much for writing this. ;_;

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thisl0ser August 13 2012, 12:24:59 UTC
You're welcome! Thanks for commenting! (I've writtlen too many depressing fics lately... I kinda want to go back and work on my less depressing fills, but that would be pretty weird after officially abandoning them, wouldn't it?)

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tj_dragonblade August 14 2012, 01:30:38 UTC
Well, 'angst meme' does kind of lend itself to depressing. ^_^;

I'd wondered if those other two long-term fics were yours - for what it's worth, I was really enjoying them. I'd love to see them finished, whether or not you keep posting them on the old meme. I really like your style and appreciate your grasp of character. ^_~ d

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thisl0ser August 14 2012, 04:55:04 UTC
Thanks! I guess my fills are pretty easy to identify. If it's overly long, rambly and features Kakashi and Gai, it was probably written by me.

Anyway, I regret abondoning those fills now, but I really didn't want to go back to the meme - because it just depresses me now (not that I actually stayed away for longer than 20 minutes). Still, I've sworn to myself that the Angst meme will be the last one in which I'll participate.

So I haven't decided what I'll do with them yet. It'd be a bit of a shame to just leave them like this, though, since they're both more than 10 000 words long.

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