Heroes fic: How You Sleep (1/12?)

Oct 20, 2010 22:50

Title: How You Sleep - Chapter One: Connections (1/12?)
Series: Heroes
Pairing: Mylar
Rating: R
Warnings: Mpreg! BS science! Fairly dark! Consent issues!
Summary: After being doused with the complete formula, Mohinder copes with a lingering side effect as he and everyone around him try to rebuild their lives and their trust.

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starrdust411 October 21 2010, 03:46:44 UTC
Oh Maya. Why couldn't you be this way in the series: functional. I liked the little argument at the end, although I do hope Mohinder can be "useful" just so he could feel better about himself. Maybe Maya will let him open all those stubborn jars? That's what men are good for, right?

Still, I can't wait to see where Mohinder & Maya's wilderness adventure goes. Will they become BFFs now? Will there be awkward UST? I want to know! XO

EDIT: Re-reading this, I noticed that at the beginning of the chapter Mohinder laments a lack of human connection and contemplates living in a house in the woods, then by the end of this chapter, both have happened. Everything comes full circle.

I wonder how Mohinder would feel if he knew that Micah was helping him out like this especially after the whole thing with Niki. Yeah, he tried to help her, but was he too busy mutating and sleeping with Maya to pick up the phone and check how she was doing?

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gaiafaye October 22 2010, 02:08:22 UTC
Just a sultry glance from Mohinder can make all nearby jars pop their tops! (Why does that sound more explicit than I mean it to?)

Patience, young one! You will see where it goes in a couple weeks, since that's about how often I plan on posting (until I inevitably can't write ahead fast enough).

I'm going to be honest and say that full circle was completely unintentional. hahaha

And I don't think it's much of a spoiler to say that Mohinder will find out who Rebel is.

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aliassmith October 21 2010, 04:40:04 UTC
Ohh, I'm going to get addicted to this series, I can tell.

"Mohinder on the run" has always been one of my absolute favourite tropes, and the fact that you added some spice to the pointless sugar that was Maya's character gives me a major happy.

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gaiafaye October 22 2010, 02:09:11 UTC
Maya totally got the short straw when it came to characterization. I'm glad you like her here!

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gaiafaye October 22 2010, 02:11:17 UTC
Haha, I think it's a safe assumption who the parent is, but I can't resist superfluous suspense. It's too much fun!

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alicambs October 21 2010, 04:54:25 UTC
Great to see this continuing. :-)

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gaiafaye October 22 2010, 02:11:36 UTC
And I'm glad you're still reading! :)

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:D errandofmercy October 21 2010, 07:25:28 UTC
I'm really starting to like this story! Can't wait to read more <3

Hey SWAT guys, friendly advice. Don't mess with Mohinder's crazy superbaby - it will FUCK you UP. :p

Keep up the awesome scenery and the tricky interactions btwn Maya and Mohinder!

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Re: :D gaiafaye October 22 2010, 02:14:04 UTC
I'm glad you're enjoying! And I think it's better to hope it's not actually a crazy superbaby. I'm getting flashbacks of twisted horror movies.

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