Woo~
The battle is over. I've been struggling with the same chapter that's posted earlier on here for some time now. Also I've been struggling, now that I'm satisfied with it, to figure out how to post it on DeviantArt for the past two days. Now it's up here and fixed in it's original post and I can relax (and work on the next chapter). Please, please, PLEASE, read and comment. Thank you!~