Comments | gaelicspirit: From Yesterday, Post 20-A/20, PG-13, Dean, Sam, OCs, GEN

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From Yesterday, Post 20-A/20, PG-13, Dean, Sam, OCs, GEN

Apr 13, 2014 12:34

Title: From Yesterday, Epilogue
Fandom: Supernatural
Author: gaelicspirit
Characters: Dean, Sam, and OCs
Disclaimer/Summary: See Part 1: Prologue
Author's Note: I just wanted to note that throughout this story, I've alternated points-of-view between Dean and Sam. When thinking about how to bookend this story, I was trying to decide whose voice ( Read more... )

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metallidean_grl April 13 2014, 18:49:58 UTC

The light generated by the brother's joined hands blasted through the Heavens. It hushed the demonic grip of Hell. It bowed every human near and caused the angels to cry out in wonder. It was a moment of pure light, pure power, generated by love and sacrifice. Dean and Sam working together has always been a force to be reckoned with. I love these words that their joined hands hushed Hell and caused angels to cry out. Beautiful.

The epilogue started in a direction I wasn't expecting. I was thinking it would pick up where the last chapter ended, so I was surprised. But this is a wonderful chapter of reflection. A nice catch-up to see what is going on in the brothers' lives all these years. I love it that Castiel is still around, although not an outwardly presence in the brothers' lives, but still there watching over them in some way.

Castiel knew as Sam did that Dean pulled out their father's journal when he was having a particularly rough day. It was Dean's tell that he needed to retreat, and Sam's signal that he needed to talk to ( ... )

gaelicspirit April 13 2014, 20:04:27 UTC

You make me smile so much. Thank you for that.

I thought about picking up where I left off, but decided that it would better serve the idea of this AU if I showed how things could have played out with them in this universe.

More Dean in the next section. Can never have enough of our hero...in fact, I'm already speculating about a one-shot for him. ;)

metallidean_grl April 13 2014, 20:21:43 UTC

After reading the next section, yes it did better serve the story to jump ahead those years and see how the brothers have settled into their "new" lives while still keeping a hold of their "old" life. It makes a nice balance and a great way to end it.

I will NEVER get enough of our hero. I will always need more Dean. Love him so. AWESOME - speculate away, as I do look forward to reading your Dean one-shot. Love your interpretation of Dean, and will never get enough. thanks.