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damietta November 16 2007, 12:11:19 UTC
Ohhh...who's on the phone!?

In Michael's defence, change is hard and losing "your best friend" and someone you love is hard. But, he's also right, it is time to grow up.

One small typo...I think you mean you've had MY mother's food.

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gaedhal November 16 2007, 16:07:29 UTC
Fixed -- thanks!

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llvoncan November 16 2007, 12:50:57 UTC
Now who might that be??? Anyone we know?? A reason to stay in Pittsburgh?? I know, All Will Be Revealed!!

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anonymous November 16 2007, 14:51:47 UTC
Great chapter. I wonder who called Brian on his cell? Looking forward for more.

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lexa4227 November 16 2007, 14:52:20 UTC
Oops forgot to sign in. :)

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shadownyc November 16 2007, 15:15:42 UTC
This is a very eye-opening chapter. I really enjoyed it.

I love the line about Melanie and her capabilities as an attorney. LOL

It was very interesting seeing the interaction between Michael and Brian. Michael mixed emotions and Brian's lack-of-reaction to the word relationship all made for quite and enlightening read.

Thank you!

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rosy5000 November 16 2007, 18:17:04 UTC
I almost feel bad for Mikey that Brian's leaving. But, yes, he does need to grow up finally.

Now... Who's on the phone? *is curious*

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