Comments | gaedhal: "253 Creekside Canyon" 16

gaedhal

"253 Creekside Canyon" 16

Jan 09, 2006 18:03

A smoke on the sofa.

( Part 16 )

ron, brian, fanfiction, qaf, creekside canyon

Comments 14

damietta January 10 2006, 00:32:36 UTC

"Billy Jack"! Oh, My, God, those were great movies. "One Tin Soldier" wasn't it?

Can you imagine Ivy huddled at her desk (surely her ear wouldn't be to the door, LOL) for two hours wondering WTF was going on in Ron's office.

And, hmmm, why WOULD Brian bring up the barebacking?

Deb

gaedhal January 10 2006, 00:58:26 UTC

Good question.

I think he's letting Ron know that he really
remembers that time in New York more than
he's admitted before. He remembers ALL of
it -- and it meant a lot to him. That's
Brian's round about way of telling him.

But it may mean more. Stay tuned.

blkandwhtcat January 10 2006, 02:02:44 UTC

I don't know if I've ever mentioned it before Gael, but I just thought I'd drop in and tell you that I LOVE THIS STREAM!!!
lol!

gaedhal January 10 2006, 02:17:22 UTC

You DO??????

NOW you tell me!

mdlaw January 10 2006, 04:21:23 UTC

Hmm, Brian letting Ron know that he remembers the way it really was, not the fantasy that Ron has created. I still can't get past my dislike of Ron. m

gaedhal January 10 2006, 04:32:40 UTC

Isn't that typical of Brian, though? Bringing
people down to earth so they can see things
the way they actually are?

mnyclp January 10 2006, 04:32:17 UTC

I loved this chapter. Brian and Ron are so playful. Brian with the just fucked look haircut awwww HOT! I want to hear all about the kickboxing session!

gaedhal January 10 2006, 04:34:59 UTC

I wanted to make certain everyone knew he was
DONE with that S5 hair!!!

connorblond January 10 2006, 17:00:29 UTC

I really need to say this. I HATE RON! I think there isn't an original character I hate so much. I even dreamt of the bastard once. ARRRRGH. It says a lot about the skill of the author that she can make me hate a character so much.

Connor

gaedhal January 10 2006, 17:41:58 UTC

LOL!

Maybe it's kind of a Love/Hate thing???

But if you react so strongly to him, I
must be doing something right.

connorblond January 10 2006, 17:50:48 UTC

oh, definitely. Very right, indeed. I mean, I hated the guy in Queer Theories and I cheered and opened a bottle of Prosecco when he bit the bullet - so to speak.
But no, no, no ... no Love/Hate thing. It's just hate. Pure and simple.

gaedhal January 10 2006, 18:43:45 UTC

Oh, you're certainly NOT alone.

Ron is a guy who causes a strong reaction
in a lot of readers.