Fic: Murphy's Law (2/12)

Oct 11, 2008 01:32

Title: Murphy's Law
Author: gabrielleabelle
Rating: R
Pairing(s)/Character(s): Just the canon ones for Season 6.
Disclaimer: Not mine. It all belongs to Joss.
Warnings: Character death. Really and seriously, this is not (and will not be) a happy or lighthearted fic. Note that this warning applies for the entire fic.
Summary: What if Giles hadn' ( Read more... )

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mabus101 October 11 2008, 08:35:47 UTC
Wow...what a fascinating train-wreck..the story! Not your writing, which is brilliant so far! (My foot has been in my mouth a lot lately...)

I love alternate outcomes, and this is one that I had had on my mind lately, so I can't wait to see what you come up with. I can't imagine how the Scoobies will manage to defeat Glory again (and it doesn't seem from the chapter titles that they'll lose, at least not for some values of the word), so I am in eager anticipation.

And you know, I'd completely lost track of the timing of S6 re: 9/11.

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gabrielleabelle October 11 2008, 21:58:13 UTC
lol. I'm glad you're enjoying it. A train-wreck is a good way to describe the events, actually. :)

And you know, I'd completely lost track of the timing of S6 re: 9/11.

I winced when I was doing research for the news report and realized that I'd had Glory bringing down a plane during an episode that had aired in early November 2001.

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mabus101 October 12 2008, 06:43:29 UTC
I winced when I was doing research for the news report and realized that I'd had Glory bringing down a plane during an episode that had aired in early November 2001.

Hmm. I suppose in theory one could use that to make legitimate philosophical points. Would be very risky though.

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gabrielleabelle October 12 2008, 07:23:09 UTC
It would certainly be interesting. But I'll leave that to someone else to explore. :) I'd prefer to keep Buffy separate from "real world" events such as that. The news reports on Buffy always seem an interesting way to view the Buffyverse from the "outside perspective" (Sunnydale having an outbreak of laryngitis in Hush? That's just funny). That's why I felt it necessary to make the reference, though I'm not planning on going any further with it.

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dreamsofspike October 11 2008, 17:07:18 UTC
this fic is just amazing, hon, i'm loving it so far :) love the little changes you're making in how it all came about in canon... love how, just like when she was crying over her mom being sick, spike went from angry and wanting to knock the crap out of her to holding her in about two seconds flat when he saw the tears :) awwwwwww... can't wait to see what happens next, hon :) *Hugs*

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gabrielleabelle October 11 2008, 22:01:15 UTC
Thanks. :) I originally wrote Spike as being way too nice in the final scene (Cause I'm a big softy when it comes to Spike). I'd forgotten how pissed he was at Buffy then. So that scene got completely rewritten, pretty much.

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mikuru_chan October 11 2008, 18:19:15 UTC
Wow. This is really great.

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gabrielleabelle October 11 2008, 22:01:39 UTC
:) Thanks.

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moscow_watcher October 12 2008, 15:51:52 UTC
I'm in love with your fic So far, the best idea is to root the story firmly in post 9/11 landscape thus providing it with a metaphorical level. Second, I love the mystery - the reason behind Glory's sudden "power she hadn't had in years". What's up with the woman she consumed? No, don't tell me! :)))

I have a small question. I want to rec your story on a forum that has separate genfic thread and Spuffy thread. Where this story fits better? (I'm not asking for spoilers, I only want to find an appropriate place for recommendation.)

Thank you for your wonderful story.

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gabrielleabelle October 12 2008, 20:55:10 UTC
I wish I could take credit for the 9/11 timing, but that was completely unintentional. However, I'm happy to see that it does actually add something to the story. :)

I have a small question. I want to rec your story on a forum that has separate genfic thread and Spuffy thread. Where this story fits better? (I'm not asking for spoilers, I only want to find an appropriate place for recommendation.)

This would probably fit best under genfic. It will have some Spuffy moments because they were a canon couple in S6. It'll also have plenty of X/A and W/T moments. The romances aren't the primary focus of the fic, though. Thank you for the rec (and I hope the rest of the chapters will be just as good).

I appreciate the comments. :)

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moscow_watcher October 12 2008, 21:13:31 UTC
gabrielleabelle October 12 2008, 21:19:54 UTC
Thank you. :)

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annegables October 14 2008, 03:08:50 UTC
This is a great alternative idea - I often thought Buffy should have killed Glory/Ben to really protect the world.

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gabrielleabelle October 14 2008, 03:27:14 UTC
She should have. But I don't think she could have in the series. This fic is the Worst Case Scenario. :)

Thanks for commenting.

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