NOTE: This takes place four weeks after Saint Valentine.
Four weeks??? Four weeks of hot angel-molesting taking place off-camera? *weeps* You will come back to that, won't you? Zeke has to be getting major flashbacks in Chem class or whatever. And where the fuck does he get off being a moody bastard when he has all the riches of Solomon underneath him every night? APPRECIATE, DUDE!
*gets shit together*
Okay, calmer.
At home he remained the soul that Casey had fallen in love with. At school he remained above the herd. But the herd were nervous.
LOL! I can just see it, how Zeke's mood is like the weather, with everyone giving the gathering storm cloud a wide berth. He is NOT someone you want to be in the path of when it all kicks off. Casey is immune from this now, in fact it's his umbrella to an extent. But you feel his bewilderment and disquiet at Zeke's rising aggression. It could rebound on him.
He asserted his authority with a look, that look. Or a cutting word. If his gaze fell upon you, you withered. It was not an option. If he spoke to you, you took it and backed away. If you retaliated… well… you just fucking didn’t.
That's actually kind of ... hot. :-) Wonder how it plays in the sack?
Maybe I'm slow, but the reason for Mr Bad was mystifying me *see angel* until the fateful call in the car *slaps forehead*. Duh! Sammi. The ex with something extra. The fic takes a swerve, as Zeke begins sweating it out, wriggling like a hooked fish.
I loved the three-way :-) conversation in the car. It was so full of the brittle ego Zeke is trying to hide, all insecurity behind the balls-out front. I got the ambivalence, his inability to cut Sammi off completely, the grudging affection he still has for him. He credits him with way too much power but it's absolutely hilarious to see him sweating at the thought of Casey in his clutches. His jealously before the fact is super hot, though. You've set Sammi up as such a predator, even more Zeke than Zeke! If that's possible.
(PS I think Casey should get to keep the wings forever :-).
Four weeks??? Four weeks of hot angel-molesting taking place off-camera? *weeps*
Oh, no... you can bet your ass it was very much ON camera. Unfortunately the boys aren't selling copies. Flashbacks nmight not be out of the question though. ;)
Yeah, Zeke's been brooding big style. This encounter with Sammi on top of his mood isn't helping him keep his cool. Sammi's every bit the predator Zeke is.
I was toying with forever!wings, but that's a lot of cost and work lost for one photoshoot. Maybe he can hire them out for special occasioins. >;)
NOTE: This takes place four weeks after Saint Valentine.
Four weeks??? Four weeks of hot angel-molesting taking place off-camera? *weeps* You will come back to that, won't you? Zeke has to be getting major flashbacks in Chem class or whatever. And where the fuck does he get off being a moody bastard when he has all the riches of Solomon underneath him every night? APPRECIATE, DUDE!
*gets shit together*
Okay, calmer.
At home he remained the soul that Casey had fallen in love with. At school he remained above the herd. But the herd were nervous.
LOL! I can just see it, how Zeke's mood is like the weather, with everyone giving the gathering storm cloud a wide berth. He is NOT someone you want to be in the path of when it all kicks off. Casey is immune from this now, in fact it's his umbrella to an extent. But you feel his bewilderment and disquiet at Zeke's rising aggression. It could rebound on him.
He asserted his authority with a look, that look. Or a cutting word. If his gaze fell upon you, you withered. It was not an option. If he spoke to you, you took it and backed away. If you retaliated… well… you just fucking didn’t.
That's actually kind of ... hot. :-) Wonder how it plays in the sack?
Maybe I'm slow, but the reason for Mr Bad was mystifying me *see angel* until the fateful call in the car *slaps forehead*. Duh! Sammi. The ex with something extra. The fic takes a swerve, as Zeke begins sweating it out, wriggling like a hooked fish.
I loved the three-way :-) conversation in the car. It was so full of the brittle ego Zeke is trying to hide, all insecurity behind the balls-out front. I got the ambivalence, his inability to cut Sammi off completely, the grudging affection he still has for him. He credits him with way too much power but it's absolutely hilarious to see him sweating at the thought of Casey in his clutches. His jealously before the fact is super hot, though. You've set Sammi up as such a predator, even more Zeke than Zeke! If that's possible.
(PS I think Casey should get to keep the wings forever :-).
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Four weeks??? Four weeks of hot angel-molesting taking place off-camera? *weeps*
Oh, no... you can bet your ass it was very much ON camera. Unfortunately the boys aren't selling copies. Flashbacks nmight not be out of the question though. ;)
Yeah, Zeke's been brooding big style. This encounter with Sammi on top of his mood isn't helping him keep his cool. Sammi's every bit the predator Zeke is.
I was toying with forever!wings, but that's a lot of cost and work lost for one photoshoot. Maybe he can hire them out for special occasioins.
>;)
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