You Said Forever [1/1]

[gabbie217]

Title: You Said Forever

Rating: PG-13

Author: gabbie217

Pairings: Rachel/Quinn; Spencer/Ashley; Minor Brittany/Santana

Sumamry: Quinn Carlin has never really gotten over losing her first true love during a shooting at Prom.

Disclaimer: I own nothing.

Spoiler Alert: If you've never seen the show, spoilers for South of Nowhere.

Author's Note: I would love

Comments

[mjacton]

Pretty good but so sad!

This is still a little rushed (Example: True, Quinn's experience hadn't been as bad as her sisters, but it had been no easier. If you took a little more time to think about the details and how it all fleshes it out, I think your writing could be really good.), but I'm not sure we could have taken more sadness anyway.

Keep writing, and I'll keep reading!

[gabbie217]

I would if I could. I'm always so impatient to get to the end. I usually "envision" or whatever the middle or the end. Not the beginnings or details. haha. I suck.

MAYBE you could help me? I could send you my stuff and you could tell me where to flesh it out.

Flesh it out sounds gross.... haha.

I'll never stop writing. Even if someone cut off my hands. I love it too much. :D

[malexfaith]

Damn this is painful. Amazing writing. I don't feel it was rushed. Although you didn't describe some issues the main one (the love between Rachel and Quinn) was written perfectly. Thanks heaps for sharing

[gabbie217]

You're welcome :] thanks for reading and commenting :]

[hostile_666]

This put the most uncomfortable lump in my throat but it was seriously amazing. Great writing :D

[gabbie217]

Thank you very much :]