FIC: ... give value to survival (Ficathon)

[ga_unicorn]

Title: ...give value to survival
Author: ga_unicorn for leafiesgirl
Word Count: ~8300
Rating: PG-13 (for some minor cussing)
Category: Gen, Team
Spoilers: Anything up to Season 3, The Return, Part II
Summary: Sheppard arranges a team-building experience which goes wrong... of course.

A/N: leafiesgirl asked for the team, lots of Sheppard whump and comfort. I hope I've

Comments

[negolith2]

Multiple shrieks tore through the air: angry avian, protesting metal and panicking scientist.

And no doubt Rodney's were the loudest. ;)

Jeez, John - there's the whole stoic leader thing, but you know, you can ask questions every once in awhile. It is allowed. Heh. I loved how worried he was about Ronon and Teyla. And I dunno - seemed like a really good team bonding experience to me.

Always wondered if there were bathrooms in those things. Funny how sci-fi doesn't have bathrooms. Must have been solved with nanotech.

[ga_unicorn]

If Rodney's shriek wasn't the loudest, I'm sure it was the most persistent.

I think Sheppard's clumsiness with expressing his feelings, when he can be so decisive with everything else, is one of the things that makes him endearing.

And don't get me started on the lack of bathrooms! ;-)

Glad you enjoyed the story, and thanks for leaving a comment.

[titan5]

Yes, very happy actually. Okay, I admit it. I was mentally screaming, "Don't stop it here!" before reading the note at the bottom. Simply wonderful - Sheppard's worry that he was losing his team, Teyla admitting that she had missed their little messes, discovering the team was still very much a team, and of course all the banter. ahhhh, this was just perfect.

[ga_unicorn]

There were many !!!!!! comments from people who got a "sneak peek." I'd said what I wanted in the story, so I added the final A/N to keep from being hunted down. ;-)

Very happy to hear you enjoyed it, and thanks for the great comment.

[linziday]

Great fic! I love teamy h/c.

And I adore the notes at the end!

[ga_unicorn]

Thank you very much. I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it.

Nice Fic

[anonymous]

That fic was great dude... I feel Sheps pain.. I did the same exact thing to my knee.. hated that brace and physio.. Anyways.. Good job..

Re: Nice Fic

[ga_unicorn]

I only hurt the ones I love. ;-) I glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for taking the time to leave a comment.

[seramercury]

You know that description of John's knee injury had me cringing!! XD

Great fic!!

[ga_unicorn]

Cringing is good! I succeeded!

Glad to hear you enjoyed it.