Bend and not Break (13/?)

Sep 09, 2007 20:33

Title:  Bend and not Break (13/?)
Author:  VietAngel
Rating:  PG-13, diving into NC-17 at the end

Summary:  George has a huge secret, Callie has huge news, and when the two collide everything explodes…pulling Callie and George apart but opening the door for new lives, new loves, and allowing Callie to reconnect with the father she never really ( Read more... )

character: george, character: callie, shipper: george/callie, author: vietangel80

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burningeden September 10 2007, 00:46:44 UTC
*cries*

That was so pretty. You're going to break my heart and I'm braced for it, but I know that it's going to be more than I can handle. I feel a hurricane coming and I'm only ready for a tropical storm.

This chapter was beautiful. But you know what? George deserves to lose her ... if that's what you are doing. Honestly is the best policy and not to sound cliche ... you reap what you sow. He's going to hurt her more than anyone should ever be hurt and it's going to make him miserable... but I wonder if he'll learn?

Please make Izz-me suffer. If nothing else happens ... make her see what she's done to Callie and feel at least something other than happiness. :(

HUGS
It was perfection.

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vietangel80 September 10 2007, 00:54:51 UTC
There's no crying in baseball! :P Seriously, thank you. George does deserve to lose her, and he will suffer greatly for what he's done. Izzie has fantasized about what it would be like if Callie was out of the way...but she's in for a rude awakening.

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burningeden September 10 2007, 02:25:51 UTC
I hope Izzie gets hit by a truck. A mack truck. I HATE HER. She's vile and has gross emotional problems.

:)

If you make me cry ... just remember the threat I made to you about that death!fic!

I think I'm going to write it anyway, but it's up to you whether or not you get a dedication and the blame. ;)

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vietangel80 September 10 2007, 03:34:53 UTC
LOL. I remember the threat. You know I read and love everything you write, so I'll probably adore it even thought it's deathfic. I might as well go ahead and take the dedication and the blame because I'm totally going to make you cry like, 2 chapters from now.

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_nigella_ September 10 2007, 01:02:22 UTC
Yay, I was SOOO excited to see that you updated!

I'm so in love with this fic, happy CaGe is hard to come by these days, and despite the impending drama, the way you write these two makes me melt.

Your writing was amazing and very true to the characters, as usual.

I can't wait till your next update, I'm so excited to see where this fic leads!

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vietangel80 September 11 2007, 21:03:23 UTC
Thanks! A lot is going to happen in the next couple of chapters. I'm hoping to have another one finished over the weekend.

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anonymous September 10 2007, 01:34:51 UTC
Awwwww..so beautiful. If only George would have made the realization that Callie was all that he needed beforehand. Now because of his dishonesty he will lose what matters to him. Calie and his daughter. He should have told her.

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vietangel80 September 11 2007, 21:13:19 UTC
Thank you! He definitely should have told her. Things might have turned out differently if he had. Of course she would have been pissed either way, but now she has to live with the knowledge that he not only cheated...he tried to hide it from her. That's going to be absolutely devastating for her.

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gibraltariana September 10 2007, 01:40:01 UTC
Beautifully done. Tasteful yet erotic.

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vietangel80 September 11 2007, 21:14:18 UTC
Thanks! I was hoping I didn't over do it. I wanted it to be smut with a purpose :)

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anonymous September 10 2007, 01:41:54 UTC
So amazing! I don't think I'm ready for them to fall apart yet. But, if you're set on breaking them up make George and Izzie suffer, but don't let them be together because I think I would vomit. Can't wait to see the next chapter.

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vietangel80 September 10 2007, 01:49:51 UTC
Thanks! No worries about Gizzie. They are vomit inducing and I can't bring myself to write it.

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burningeden September 10 2007, 02:26:22 UTC
Oh thank god.

I would have died otherwise.

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vietangel80 September 11 2007, 20:57:12 UTC
When I originally started this story I planned to let The Hobbit Manwhore and Skank Barbie get together, but when I tried to write it I fell out of my chair...seriously, one of the wheels broke off. If that's not a sign from the universe, I don't know what is.

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