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[burningeden]

Title: Ready For A Fall (11/?)
Author: Chelle Storey-Daniel
Pairing: Addison/Mark, Callie/George, Callie/Alex (friendship), George/Izzie (implied)
Rating: NC17
Summary: Sometimes it hurts to fall, but if you're lucky someone may catch you. And they may be falling, too.

Comments

[xyliette]

Ah hahaha First comment! I am kind of competitive. Anyway, insides on the outside as foreplay- hilarious! Great chapter.

[burningeden]

Thank you!!!! I'm so glad you're competitive and that you dug the comment. George was pretty cocky in this piece, but he's forgetting that he LIED to her ... uh oh. :)

[callieluvr]

While I still hate George and want Callie with Alex...I have to say that was a pretty amazing chapter. The sex, while I"m not a fan of the penis, was pretty damned hot.

Nice job ;)

p.s: I made a couple of icons for you. I'll shwo you latex condoms.

[burningeden]

Grrrrrr.... I need it!!!! :) :)

((((HUGS))))

Callie and Alex ... you know, it may happen. It just may happen. And I so need you to help me with the Caddie sex because I am a fan of the penis and I am stuck.

[callieluvr]

I shall def help. go on AIM, woman! I am holding your icons hostage until you do.

[vietangel80]

I think this is my new favorite chapter. I like that George has some backbone now, but his plan to save her from any further pain will backfire eventually, it always does. She's going to find out about that kiss somehow. Everyone finds out everything in Seattle Grace.

I'm glad Callie's dad finally told her he wasn't really mad at her. I was a little pissed at him for saying it in the first place...because every daddy's girl knows that to have dad disappointed in you hurts more than anything--even more than having a filthy cheater husband.

The quasi-makeup sex? HOT.

Uh oh, Callie's true Wonder Twin is on the way...something tells me George is going to be in a little bit of trouble again. I can't wait for Cam to arrive! I think I love him already.

[burningeden]

Oh, George is hurting. Cam will make him *miserable*. All of the Torres clan will because ... yeah, secrets come out. And the aftermath of this one is just not pretty.

Raphael made me mad, too. It's funny, that scene where he climbs in the back of her car and see the bottles and makes her feel thisbig ... that happened to me. It almost played out exactly the way I wrote it and when my dad said it to me ... he took off my glasses, tilted my face, and let it fly. And I curled up under the stage at the fair where I was singing and cried until I had to go perform. It was ANGUISH. But I get why he did it. My dad and Raph. As hard as it was to see the aftermath of Callie's rampage ... it was even harder to see her not care and he *snapped*.

The quasi-makeup sex was rewritten to keep emotion out of it on Callie's part about ten times. She went through the motions and they were enjoyable motions, but she felt like crap afterwards.

George really needs to stop being cocky. :)

Thank you!!!!

[aclairec]

ahhh I feel so repetitive saying that I absolutely love it after every single chapter but I just can't help it...it's the truth. I am seriously invested in this world you have created and would read all night if I could. Loved how George stood up to Callie with his comments but i am nervous for him b/c of his lie. Can't wait til Cam gets to town!

~A

[burningeden]

Thank you!!

You've seen how the lie played out now. :) Boy, it's just *bad*. I don't know what he's thinking.

I would write all night if I could ... and actually kept tinkering on the newest part for most of the night, but gosh, I'm tired today. :)

Thanks for reading it and for the feedback :)

keyko

[anonymous]

i love the chapter!! specially the sex.. ^^'

i so loved callie's reaction after she had sex with george..

continue soon, please!!

thanks and bye!!

Re: keyko

[burningeden]

Thank you!

Her reaction was intense, but hella cute at times, too. :)