Ooooh! You need ideas? I'm idea girl! You've done a bit of foreshadowing so far with George's feelings of inadequacy in the money department. I think you should expound on that.
I think that Olivia should ask George why he married Callie and have him explain to her that when he looks at Callie ... everything in the world suddenly makes sense. Olivia should tell him that she hates Callie and try to tell him why (something really stupid of course), but he won't listen to it. He doesn't want to hear anyone else hating on her and tells Olivia that unless she wants to say something pleasant then she can shut up because if she dogs Callie ... she's dogging HIM. Izzie, who is trying to find some Ortho stuff, hears everything George says to Olivia and realizes that hey ... he truly does love Callie and she makes him happy.
So Izzie makes nice with Callie for the time being and apologizes to her. She even asks about the wedding and about Callie's family, etc. Callie and George go to Meredith's that night and are having a great dinner with Derek, Izzie, and Meredith. George tells them all about how romantic Vegas was and Derek says that Vegas is too expensive. So George admits that Callie paid for it all and realizes that he feels like a failure. Izzie asks how Callie can afford everything ... and it comes out that Callie's rich. (How? You decide. :))
George should be furious that she never told him that she is wealthy and they have their first really bad disagreement as a married couple. (George feels stupid for giving her such a small, lame ring when she's rich and he thinks her family will make fun of him for being poor. She should explain that she didn't tell him because she wanted to make sure he loved her and not her bank account.) It's so bad that Callie leaves and goes back to the hotel and George stays at home. *Izzie* should be the one who reminds George of what he said to Olivia and explain that just because Callie has money ... she's still the same person. She explains that when Denny gave her all that money ... she never changed and money shouldn't come between George and Callie.
So, George goes to the hotel and it takes some coaxing on his part, but she accepts his apology and tells him that she hates material things which is why she loves the ring he gave her, etc. There are so many possibilities. If you want to turn it into a saga and have a multipart fic ... you could introduce members of her family who may or may not like George. You could have Izzie and Callie fall out again or become great friends. I think you should definitely show how Louise, Ronnie and Jerry react to the marriage. Do they love Callie and welcome her? Or do they think it was too rushed?
It's such a strong, powerful start to this story that you could take it anywhere. And ... I'd be honored if you would consider maybe writing a fic with me one day. A joint effort. :)
Those are some good ideas. I'm going to work on the next chapter tonight in between school junk. This is much better than school.
I would LOVE to write something with you! That would be an honor, and so much fun. Let's do it. I'm not very good with LiveJournal, is there any easier way to communicate besides leaving these feedback comments?
I think that Olivia should ask George why he married Callie and have him explain to her that when he looks at Callie ... everything in the world suddenly makes sense. Olivia should tell him that she hates Callie and try to tell him why (something really stupid of course), but he won't listen to it. He doesn't want to hear anyone else hating on her and tells Olivia that unless she wants to say something pleasant then she can shut up because if she dogs Callie ... she's dogging HIM. Izzie, who is trying to find some Ortho stuff, hears everything George says to Olivia and realizes that hey ... he truly does love Callie and she makes him happy.
So Izzie makes nice with Callie for the time being and apologizes to her. She even asks about the wedding and about Callie's family, etc. Callie and George go to Meredith's that night and are having a great dinner with Derek, Izzie, and Meredith. George tells them all about how romantic Vegas was and Derek says that Vegas is too expensive. So George admits that Callie paid for it all and realizes that he feels like a failure. Izzie asks how Callie can afford everything ... and it comes out that Callie's rich. (How? You decide. :))
George should be furious that she never told him that she is wealthy and they have their first really bad disagreement as a married couple. (George feels stupid for giving her such a small, lame ring when she's rich and he thinks her family will make fun of him for being poor. She should explain that she didn't tell him because she wanted to make sure he loved her and not her bank account.) It's so bad that Callie leaves and goes back to the hotel and George stays at home. *Izzie* should be the one who reminds George of what he said to Olivia and explain that just because Callie has money ... she's still the same person. She explains that when Denny gave her all that money ... she never changed and money shouldn't come between George and Callie.
So, George goes to the hotel and it takes some coaxing on his part, but she accepts his apology and tells him that she hates material things which is why she loves the ring he gave her, etc. There are so many possibilities. If you want to turn it into a saga and have a multipart fic ... you could introduce members of her family who may or may not like George. You could have Izzie and Callie fall out again or become great friends. I think you should definitely show how Louise, Ronnie and Jerry react to the marriage. Do they love Callie and welcome her? Or do they think it was too rushed?
It's such a strong, powerful start to this story that you could take it anywhere. And ... I'd be honored if you would consider maybe writing a fic with me one day. A joint effort. :)
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I would LOVE to write something with you! That would be an honor, and so much fun. Let's do it. I'm not very good with LiveJournal, is there any easier way to communicate besides leaving these feedback comments?
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My email is dani9027 at bellsouth dot net (sorry, I don't want robots stealing my addy and spamming me. :) )
On AOL IM I am GodlessHeathen69 (don't ask. I lost a bet and got stuck with it.)
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I can't wait!!!
I'm working on part three at least for a little while longer. Then it's biochem for a few hours, blah.
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