Here Without You (1/1)

May 11, 2008 06:18

Title: Here Without You
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author: citron_presse, character: mark, shipper: mark/addison

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anonymous May 11 2008, 06:21:22 UTC
I feel so sorry for Mark although I love fics like this were Mark is all heartbroken and sad over Addison leaving.

I like that you added something about her hair colour.

I so happy that he called her in the end.

Jody

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citron_presse May 12 2008, 05:16:00 UTC
Thank you so much :)

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eighteenthmarch May 11 2008, 18:48:19 UTC
Awesome. Very deep. Mark is such a complex character and you really do him justice.

A part of him had hoped he’d be there to see that, but most of him had always known he wouldn’t and, like always, life had conformed to his lowest expectations.

How philosophical. I like it.

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citron_presse May 12 2008, 05:30:01 UTC
I just always find myself empathizing with Mark and I'm happy you think I've done him justice. Thank you for the lovely comment.

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xyliette May 11 2008, 21:03:37 UTC
I think...we have the same brain. Haha, I'm working on a little something like this actually. I love your Mark, you seem to really get him which helps me sympathize, not that he didn't look absolutely heartbroken at the end of the last ep, but he's still kind of an ass.

That’s a good sign, to someone desperate anyway. She still has his number programmed in her phone. So, so true.

Thanks!

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citron_presse May 12 2008, 05:37:19 UTC
The thought that we have the same brain is just making me smile right now :) Partly because it's such a nice thought; and partly because I really like your brain!

Thank you for loving my Mark and I'm happy that I help you sympathize. He needs sympathy!

I'm looking forward to reading the little something you're working on.

Thank you so much for the comment.

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xyliette May 12 2008, 16:07:43 UTC
My brain just creates more and more problems but I'm glad you like it. Hoping to finish it tonight...with any luck. ;)

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chris_baby May 12 2008, 14:14:21 UTC
I think...we have the same brain. Haha, I'm working on a little something like this actually.

Dammit! Everyone is. ;P Now I feel discouraged to finish mine because you rule and all that. Yet! Looking forward to your take!

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chris_baby May 12 2008, 14:18:22 UTC
See, this is why I generally don't read fic when I'm writing one. Alas. I couldn't help but click since you do angst so lovely (so lovely!) and now I'm all torn on finishing my take because - of course! - it involves similar thoughts. Gah!

/self-involved like whoa

This story was really good, goes great with the episode which broke my Mark-lovin' heart as well. I just love suffering for him, there's no helping that.

Angst. Let me wallow in it. *wallows*

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citron_presse May 12 2008, 14:24:26 UTC
Finish it! Please! You do angst, and Mark, so lovely (!) too :) and I want to read your take. The more wallowing the better, I say!

And, of course, thank you :)

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mossharts May 29 2008, 14:09:20 UTC
A part of him had hoped he’d be there to see that, but most of him had always known he wouldn’t and, like always, life had conformed to his lowest expectations.I love it. It encompasses the entire fic and how I feel (and obviously how you feel) about Mark, it's so hapless. I really just wish that they would add this dimension of Mark to Grey's, it would just pull everything together. Especially when the finale is considered, everyone was brought to a conclusion, or, be as it may, a beginning; but Mark has just forever remained a man-whore, and to a certain extent, it's rather tiring ( ... )

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citron_presse May 29 2008, 17:50:41 UTC
First of all, thank you so much for taking up my slightly crazy invitation :) I'm glad you also feel that we share a similar concept of Mark.

Then, thank you for the awesome comment. You hardly read anything into it that's not there and I really appreciate your perceptiveness. You did add one thing and that is the irony of Addison's bringing up Mark's infidelity. When I wrote her few lines, I was sort of in her head and I didn't (stupidly really) think of it this way so, thank you for adding that; and I mean adding, because the interaction of the writer and the reader makes the story really ( ... )

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