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g_girl143 September 11 2009, 12:43:05 UTC
Thank you so much! First comment! Yey! Hmm...maybe I should hold a first to comment contest one day, LOL!

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n_e_star September 11 2009, 14:21:29 UTC
Awwwwww... He got her a My Lil' Pony!

I was kinda scared with where the scene was going, but now Penny is on the case and Ramona's going DOWN!!!

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babebubeboink99 September 11 2009, 15:04:50 UTC
LOL! I'm glad you learned your lesson well. But just in case *pats pile of boots beside her*

This is actually much better than if you had given in to the temptation. The story progresses without sacrificing the hot. Kudos.

And I agree with n_e_star here! Queen Penelope is IN THE HOUSE BABY! BOOYAH!!

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g_girl143 September 12 2009, 01:40:11 UTC
I learned my lesson. That's why if you need to throw those, I'm good and ready, hiding under my bomb shelter LOL!

And trust me, girl, it was hard. In the rough draft, I ALMOST made them do it but I slapped myself with the original outline LOL. And yeah, BOOOYAH! Queen Penelope to Sheldor's rescue ^_^

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g_girl143 September 12 2009, 01:38:00 UTC
hehe, thanks n_e_star! But hey, Penny has to find out some time, right? ^_^ Rather than the usual boring I'll just go investigate or just an accidental discovery, let's go for HAAAWWT! ^_^ Thanks so much for reading :D

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discoverybay September 11 2009, 15:09:16 UTC
Wow...I don't know if I should feel bad for Penny, Sheldon, Ramona/Leslie when Penny finds out what they're doing, or all of them!

Wonderful chapter, as always. My emotions changed paths so quickly (dread, glee, horror, then a mixture of all three!) that I think I need to go watch cartoons now to even them out. ;) It's always nice to find a story that can invoke emotion in the reader (and there doesn't seem to be a shortage of those in Paradox).

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g_girl143 September 12 2009, 01:44:41 UTC
Whoa! Thank you so much discoverybay *blushes* Glad this fic could make you feel all those. And yeah, perhaps a dose of Disney would do wonders ^_^

I agree. There are a lot of inspiring fics here in Paradox which then inspires other writers. Everything's a cycle :D

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discoverybay September 12 2009, 04:58:25 UTC
Okay, I have a mildly entertaining story regarding this story.

Earlier, my roommate briefly looked over my shoulder while I was re-reading one of the previous chapters and called me a pervert. She then (jokingly?) proceeded to tell me how weird it is to read stories about our neighbor, Penelope. Our (blonde!) neighbor Penelope who, I just found out (literally, like 10 minutes ago), has a tall, thin, pale, dark-haired boyfriend (whom she apparently cannot take out in public because he has "issues" playing nice with other people).

Sound like anyone we know?

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g_girl143 September 12 2009, 08:01:23 UTC
OH MY GOODNESS! Would I be like some major stalker creepy ramona if I asked you to take a picture of the two of em? whahahaa

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dark_spidey September 11 2009, 16:11:10 UTC
HOLY...CRAP...ON...A...FREAKIN'...CRACKER!!

Oh man if I were Ramona or Leslie I would HIDE! Penny will undoubtedly show them a world of hurt once she finds out what they've done!

Great chapter! As always can't wait for more!

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g_girl143 September 12 2009, 01:48:37 UTC
Haha! Thanks dark_spidey! :D Love the icon as always LOL and with the additional Freakin to boot...well, guess you liked this chapter, LOL!

Definite teaser investigation and confrontations ^_^ Let's let Queen Penelope loose...

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annjej76 September 13 2009, 17:51:51 UTC
Don't forget Doctor Stephanie...she better hide too! She's the one who told him everything was honkey-donkey!

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g_girl143 September 14 2009, 07:01:47 UTC
Ehem....there will be a return of a quote from Dr. Stephanie Barnett in Chapter 15 :P

Wow, there are lots of women after Sheldon for wholly different reasons in this fic LOL

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takineko September 11 2009, 16:45:32 UTC
That was kind of sad, poor Sheldon, they're turning him into a violent rapist ;n;

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g_girl143 September 12 2009, 01:49:58 UTC
Penny had to find out somehow. I know it's freaky, as gemsile123 said, it's something that isn't found very often in the fandom, so I thought I'd have a go at it. Here's to hoping for better chapters ^_^

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