Turtle Story: Earth, Fire, Water, Wind

[g33kg1rl]

Author: Melissa the Damgel 
Series: Vindicated
Title: Earth, Fire, Water, Wind
Pairing: Raph/Don
Rating: Pg
Summary: Raph and Donnie share a moment during their once a month get-togethers.  
Warning for this chapter: Err... talk of Character death I guess...
Author's Note: The boys are 17 years old in this one.

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~Earth, Fire, Water, Wind~

There

Comments

[geaven]

You know, I'm glad you updated before I went to bed. This'll be the last thing I do before I go to sleep. I don't know in what time zone you live, but here in Sweden, I'm six hours ahead of NYC (I always use NYC as a reference). So it's 11.30 pm here now. Lucky I got to read this!

Anyway, it was kind of sweet. I liked it that tinkering with the vehicles, up to their elbows in grease, is Raph's idea of a romantic date. ;) And their ways of expressing emotions in the end was very well-written and thought-out. Good job!

Oh well, my bed awaits me. Nightie night!

[polaris2000]

I LOVE them bonding over bikes!! It's so incredibly cute and manly-just like Raph. I also liked Donnie's analysis of the family, and the musing about life after Splinter. Also, movie reference is Win! I really like these moment in time fics for this series..it gives more weight to the idea that time is passing

And I'm loving all your Kuro/Fai icons!

[g33kg1rl]

*glomps you!* yay! A Kuro/Fai fan! *giggles and snuggles you* I'm glad you're liking the series so far. I don't normally write like this - it's a little disjointed for me... but i guess thursday's post and onwards is more the style i use because it's more linear and in order ^_^ but yay! I'm glad someone liked the movie reference! it flowed so perfectly into the fic that i was -happy-. *nods*

thanks for the review! *grins* i'm glad so far everyone likes the idea of them having a bike-date XD yay!

~Mel

[my_fool_took]

*squeee* Don + Raph + motorbike = thank you for brightening my day lol. So sweet as usual :D

[aloneindarknes7]

Aw, this was so sweet, as per-usual for your sections. If I hadn't read ahead, (still hitting myself for ruining it) I'd probably be wishing for Splinter to die. Thankfully, I'll just wish that he approves faster!