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TITLE: Visitation
RATING: PG at most. No kinks. Surprised? Me too! :D
FANDOMS: Buffy the Vampire Slayer, Angel the Series & Tanz der Vampire
SPOILERS: Buffy S1-7, Angel S1-5.
SERIES: Part of Carpe Noctem series. In order: Til The Moon Is Abed (Slash/Het), Unwritten Words, What Remains, The Gentler Sex, the chapter immediately preceding this chapter

Comments

[ciciaye]

Excellent stuff :-)
I like the way Dawn teases Herbert - she's like a strong-willed sister to him, in many ways. (Okay, a sister he tries to eat at least once...*g*)
CCA

[fyrie]

Methinks the Dawnie-monster has spent far too much time in the company of Spike :D She's far too much fun to write as well. A side of badass on top of annoying sibling :D

[ciciaye]

Plot-bunny ahead...

Will Willow be visiting the Krolocks again? Because I think that, with their shared love of books, she and Von Krolock would really enjoy each other's company. Plus, I can imagine him making gentlemanly moves towards her, and then being somewhat taken aback when Willow explains she only likes the ladies... (Although he'd probably take that as a challenge, I should think. And he'd probably succeed...*g*)
CCA

[fyrie]

Willow's actually not going to be visiting again any time soon, but simply for the reason that I really can't write the wench. Out of all of Buffyverse, she's my biggest weakness and always has been (Spike's always been my strongest, along with Dru - big surprise there :D). I tend to avoid writing her where I can. (admittedly, originally, I did have an idea for her being about more plus, being bisexual, a sexual state that clearly doesn't exist in Jossverse where there's only teh straight or teh gay, but during the writing of that chapter, I realised I just hate the way I write her)

Plus, VK's being ridiculously distracted by the spunky, stubborn, aggressive, independent, fearless little psycho of a sister of Buffy's :D

[bwinter]

Incidentally, I have cheerleader armour and pompoms in Fëanorian colours. Leftover from my Tolkien days :D

[fyrie]

Sometimes, I wonder if I should worry about you ;D

[bwinter]

Not until it's too late to escape :D

[fyrie]

Oh, I did have a random thought... how would Gabriel get on with VK? I was wondering that today.

[carmentalis]

Wonderful, more good fic!

I love the sibling dynamics between Dawn and Herbert. And your Buffy makes me want to growl and hit her over the head for her cluelessness, just like in the series. ;-)

[fyrie]

I was surprised by the fact I actually didn't mind Buffy as much as I thought I would. Though I will admit a huge honking great crush on Vittorio! :D

[carmentalis]

Vittorio is just lovely. How much of him is canon? I never saw Angel, so I'm a bit clueless as far as that's concerned.

[fyrie]

He was only ever described. Never named. Never seen. Just charming is all we know. (plus, he bedded Darla and Dru simultaneously, while he had Angelus and Spike chained up in a cellar somewhere ;) A bit of a lothario by all accounts)

[madannekidd]

*giggle* I love Willow's distraction with the books. Poor Giles. I love how you've portrayed all the characters, and I love the relationships between all of them. The scene with Dawn scaring Herbert was just amusing, and I can't wait to see what happens with her and von Krolock.

[fyrie]

The next chapter is just being edited right now :D this mini-crossover-verse has taken over my brain :D

[pinkdormouse]

I *adore* your Dawn in this one.

[fyrie]

Oh, she only gets worse as the series goes on :D